Orc

An happy orc. It's a WIP: I'll do some clothes tomorow. It'll be a good training.

Uhm... don't know why, but I don't like it. But I can't find anything wrong with it. Maybe the eyes... or not... dunno really. It's OK but I don't like it, that's all. :(


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Because it's a monster :\ ?

i like the hair... i also like the shape of the head.

what bothers me is the ears (they need to be a bit flatter against the head), and the way the mouth is. i know hes happy, but he looks sorta whimpy. if i were you, id use bolder lines on the parts that matter on orcs. mouth, eyes, jaw, and eyebrows (not the hairy part, orcs dont have those. im talking about the actualy peice of muscle and skin that allows them to be lowered/raised).

see what you can do with that... keep it up, SRj.

Adding on to what flamesforzuljin said, the tusks also need to be bigger. Flames already pointed out the other problems i can see. Like the others said, he does look wimpy.

The ears look somewhat like carrots, the hair doesnt look attached to his head, the lip is like a rope, the tusks need to be bigger, it looks odd with only like 5 teeth sticking out of his mouth in random spots, the shading is off, the nose is sideways, both eyes look same even tho they are on diffrent sides, and the ass chin just looks weird.

the sideways nose and 'random' teeth are called a 'facial expression'

i see no flaws in the shading. mind pointing them out to me?

You can notice there are more shadings on the right side.

When I make any expression, or any human I beleive, I have never seen random teeth dissappear or go lower then other teeth. And the sideways nose, there is no wrinkles or any kind of skin tension to indicate that he is moving the nostril which usualy happens if you do that kind of expression. As for the shading, its really hard and only shades a minimal part, and even if he was currently being lighted by the brightest bright light in the world, there needs to be a balance, and the brighter light shines on the face, the darker the darks have to be.

hmm... ok cool, i understand what youre saying now. thanks for helping me out.

I don't agree.

Yet another orc. But not very happy. I spent 6 minutes so far, it's a WIP naturly.

his right ears too low, thats the only thing i can see now...

quick update.
Oh don't worry, there are actually tons of other problems... but I'll fix them

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