| 03-03-2005, 12:03 AM | #1 |
A hard working crew is busy constructing ships for the nearby naval base. It's a misty day over the island today, the sailors' arrival has been delayed. The labourers continue their daily work, awaiting the arrival of the crew to take away their newest work. Hopfully they will arrive soon, but who knows what could be hiding in the seas on a day like this? Originally a concept for Gitlich's AC. I decided to expand on it a bit and create some more terrain, the wavegates provide power to the shipyard, and the crew build their ships for the nearby naval base. Comments appreciated! |
| 03-03-2005, 12:53 AM | #2 |
Not bad but make the surroundfing area more than 1 tile. |
| 03-14-2005, 01:30 PM | #3 |
is the half-bridge a barracks and support col.? anyway, gj! |
| 03-14-2005, 01:44 PM | #4 |
Guest | It's good but I think you should put some additional tiles instead of only rocky terrain. Also, add a little more vegetation in the surrounding area to make it look more alive. I would also suggest on adding some crates, planks, tools, lights, torches, whatever... in the shipyard area to make it look more active than it does right now. |
| 03-15-2005, 01:38 AM | #5 |
Also pay some attention to the waterfall, it appears to just begin from the rocks, and isn't a continuation from a previous body of water or something. Otherwise, I think you've managed to capture the feel of a shipyard. Just needs a little extra detail to give it 'life' though. |
| 03-16-2005, 01:03 AM | #6 |
the thing i dont like most is its very under proportion....the ship is too small compared to the guy....but other than that its ok. -Murcielago) |
| 03-17-2005, 08:43 AM | #7 |
Guest | I think these look pretty good, gotta agree about the waterfall though, needs more ''life'' ^_^ . Keep up the good work! |
| 03-17-2005, 12:59 PM | #8 |
Great job but it all looks too grey (perhaps it is suposued to be I dunno) and monotone. Nice buildhands (near the ship) may I suggest making it on a ramp so It could slide down into the sea :) Just kidding |
| 03-17-2005, 01:30 PM | #9 |
Cool atmosphere to it all. :) I didnt know Stephen worked in a shipyard. |
| 03-17-2005, 09:00 PM | #10 |
Thanks :) It was intended to be pretty monotone, also, I couldn't really find any other tiles that fit well enough with the atmospheare, so I left it as rocks. I also wanted it to be a little place, no giant ships ![]() |
