My brothers first skin

Here is my brothers fist skin. He is only 9 so, Its pretty good for his age. This is only a picture of it, not the acual skin. Tell me what you think.

well tail of the wyrm is olny 8 and hes done way beter freehand skins.until you show us his blp i wont say anythign about it.

What's this yellow thing at the back of his head supposed to be?

U know 9 year olds, its probly a sad du rag

here's a tip for your brother: never skin again.