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My first pieces of terrain

03-13-2005, 06:29 PM#1
Guest
Not first first but first serious terrain I have made, tell me what you thought about it and what you think I should improve.
Edit: changed pics to jpeg.
03-13-2005, 07:28 PM#2
Metal_Sonic64
What do I think... I think you should open them up in paint, go to save as- and save them as jpegs :)
03-13-2005, 07:42 PM#3
Quickshok
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Originally Posted by Metal_Sonic64
What do I think... I think you should open them up in paint, go to save as- and save them as jpegs :)
As do I. Us people hates them bmp's.
03-13-2005, 07:58 PM#4
Guest
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Originally Posted by Metal_Sonic64
What do I think... I think you should open them up in paint, go to save as- and save them as jpegs :)
*Sigh* I will do it right away then.
Edit: made the promised changes.
03-13-2005, 08:32 PM#5
muldav
I really like the first screenshot, the mood of the scene rocks!

the next ones are quite interesting but not as good as the first one in my opinion. They are still pretty wellmade and I can only say that you should keep terraining.

as a wise guy once said. Training makes perfect!

Yours Truly
MuldaV

PS: BMP is an illspoken thing around here just so that you know. Write that behind your ear :P
03-13-2005, 09:23 PM#6
Murcielago)
not bad, could use more detail tho

-Murcielago)
03-14-2005, 04:59 AM#7
Quickshok
Much better, thank you for that.

For the first SS, I agree with Muldav, very cool indeed. One thing that looked weird to me, was the little white rays going up. My suggestion would be to have those reach up much much higher, preferably up beyond sight. I feel that would give them a feeling of more meaning.

The fifth one looked quite strange to me, beacause the coloration of the foreground made me believe at first it was set with the first group. Otherwise I would suggest filling in the area between the trees and the wall, it is a bit too empty. Also I feel something should be rising into the sky behind the walls. Some sort of structure should be there.

And for the final one primarily there needs to be something filling in the background. Also the pond looks very strange in that sort of atmosphere.
03-14-2005, 01:23 PM#8
Guest
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Originally Posted by Quickshok
For the first SS, I agree with Muldav, very cool indeed. One thing that looked weird to me, was the little white rays going up. My suggestion would be to have those reach up much much higher, preferably up beyond sight. I feel that would give them a feeling of more meaning.
Yeah, you are probably right, I might change it if I get the time to do it.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Quickshok
The fifth one looked quite strange to me, beacause the coloration of the foreground made me believe at first it was set with the first group. Otherwise I would suggest filling in the area between the trees and the wall, it is a bit too empty. Also I feel something should be rising into the sky behind the walls. Some sort of structure should be there.
That pic is actualy a part of the map im currently making, as I focused on the forest and pond thats the only things that had been made yet. The pond is actualy on the inside of the wall. I will probably add in more when I have finished.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Quickshok
And for the final one primarily there needs to be something filling in the background. Also the pond looks very strange in that sort of atmosphere.
The same thing goes for this pic, it is on the inside and is unfinished. I think it looks cool, maybe it doesent fit in perfectly but thats just how it goes ^_^
03-16-2005, 09:13 AM#9
divine_peon
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Originally Posted by ReunloN
Not first first but first serious terrain I have made, tell me what you thought about it and what you think I should improve.
Edit: changed pics to jpeg.
i loved the atmosphere of the last pic. good job. keep it up!
03-16-2005, 11:16 AM#10
Guest
great terain so far :)
03-17-2005, 01:11 PM#11
Belphegor666
The atmoshere is absolutely wicked and foul (the temple looks uber evil). Anyhow greatwork
03-17-2005, 06:31 PM#12
Guest
Thanks guys! I really appreciate it.