| 03-13-2005, 06:29 PM | #1 |
Guest | Not first first but first serious terrain I have made, tell me what you thought about it and what you think I should improve. Edit: changed pics to jpeg. |
| 03-13-2005, 07:28 PM | #2 |
What do I think... I think you should open them up in paint, go to save as- and save them as jpegs :) |
| 03-13-2005, 07:42 PM | #3 | |
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| 03-13-2005, 07:58 PM | #4 | |
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Edit: made the promised changes. |
| 03-13-2005, 08:32 PM | #5 |
I really like the first screenshot, the mood of the scene rocks! the next ones are quite interesting but not as good as the first one in my opinion. They are still pretty wellmade and I can only say that you should keep terraining. as a wise guy once said. Training makes perfect! Yours Truly MuldaV PS: BMP is an illspoken thing around here just so that you know. Write that behind your ear :P |
| 03-13-2005, 09:23 PM | #6 |
not bad, could use more detail tho -Murcielago) |
| 03-14-2005, 04:59 AM | #7 |
Much better, thank you for that. For the first SS, I agree with Muldav, very cool indeed. One thing that looked weird to me, was the little white rays going up. My suggestion would be to have those reach up much much higher, preferably up beyond sight. I feel that would give them a feeling of more meaning. The fifth one looked quite strange to me, beacause the coloration of the foreground made me believe at first it was set with the first group. Otherwise I would suggest filling in the area between the trees and the wall, it is a bit too empty. Also I feel something should be rising into the sky behind the walls. Some sort of structure should be there. And for the final one primarily there needs to be something filling in the background. Also the pond looks very strange in that sort of atmosphere. |
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| 03-16-2005, 09:13 AM | #9 | |
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| 03-16-2005, 11:16 AM | #10 |
Guest | great terain so far :) |
| 03-17-2005, 01:11 PM | #11 |
The atmoshere is absolutely wicked and foul (the temple looks uber evil). Anyhow greatwork |
| 03-17-2005, 06:31 PM | #12 |
Guest | Thanks guys! I really appreciate it. |
