Something Awful

or at least in my opinion
I screwed up on lots of things

like the thumb holding the helmet
the trigger parts of the rifle
his facial expressions
etc.

the giant cannon isnt a cannon, its a light weight gun.

Since I don't think anyone else will post on this thread I'll post... I'm afraid I have to agree with you on this being awful there are multiple anatomy issues and his right leg isn't even finished. All I can say is spend more time on drawings and don't be afraid to erase. I know I have said this before but it is hard to stress how important these things are. Also draw outlines or boxes before you start doing the details of the character this can greatly decrease anatomy issues. I don't want to be cruel but I am just stating facts to help fellow artists.

yea
I did - sorta
no wait
not on THIS one, the others I do presketch

Like his right shoulder is too far out
and his thumb holding the helmet is weird
and the mouth
and he's way too bulky for a tau

anything else?

coloring


this is what they're suppose to look like