On my mind

Part 1: Life of me
Sunday.
Six o'clock.
Driving home.
Another normal day.
The hills that fly by.
The cars whizzing past my window.
Just like any day, they all fall into pattern.
Wake up, get dressed, do this, do that, as always.
As if my life isnt controlled by me but by some greater force
Who got bored with my life and set it on replay.
As we drive I suddenly get deja vu
Suddenly everything looks farmiliar
That blue car, that tuft of grass
But I recall something
Like a twinge in my mind
Something is going to happen
As if fate himself decided to glance upon my life
Before I come to full realization of this, something happens
Breaks slam, tires squeal
And I know, before I go unconcious
This wasnt just a mere car crash...

Part 2

Morals
I always thought that maybe
Maybe what we are doing is wrong
Maybe we are working for the greater good
But is this truly the greater good?
Why must we take lives?
Is causing disaster
Truly, in some strange way
Morally correct?
To wreck someone's life...
How can that be for the greater good?
Is it?

Part 3
The city Rhee
If one was not looking to closely
Perhaps he would see some buildings
And if he looked a little closer
He would notice the friendly demeanor of the people
If he lived there for a month
He would notice people funnel into groups
If he lived there for half a year
He might start noticing that these groups share common characteristics
And if he lived there for a full year
He would understand why they funnel into groups...

Well, I had it was on my mind.

BTW since this is WC3 unrelated, feel free to move it. Although I've been noticing that some stories here arent.

I doubt it matters. after 2 years or so this subforum is finaly an active part of wc3campaings.com. So i think any posts are good when it comes to this place.

i like those poems when someone tells something with as little words as possible, you got a sweet climax.
but i loved this part. its bloody brilliant.
As if my life isnt controlled by me but by some greater f***e
Who got bored with my life and set it on replay.

Thanks a lot. I added two more parts. I hope you all like it :)

Awesome. I like it alot, if you warped it it might even become lyrics. Ingenius, and I like the way it's shaped ;).

its good, not amazing, but still good. I give you a B for the writing and an A for the ideas