| 04-10-2005, 09:08 PM | #1 |
| 04-10-2005, 09:41 PM | #2 |
i actually like this one better. the blue opens your eyes! to me, its more like liquid nitrogen. it drips down and starts ... evaporating... like mana? |
| 04-11-2005, 12:22 AM | #3 |
I like the composition on this one alot better... but the background doesn't seem to fit... and I'd say that the face seems a bit too short... more swirlies in the mana... more swirlies... icbm1987 |
| 04-11-2005, 04:59 AM | #4 |
The ambience and atmosphere on your old one . . . I think I liked that better. Having said that, I do like the execution of the background on this one, but I don't know if I like how it fits the theme. Good use of colors in th ebeast; you could not hurt from pushing the variation in hue in the local color; let's see some yellows or purples perhaps, sparingly. Also, the bottom of his deltoid forms a sort of tangent with the bottom of his chest and wrecks some of the depth in that area. Give him a deeper, more barrel-like chest. Also, it is a little blurry; some time spent tightening and sharpening areas up would not go amiss. Keep at it! |
| 04-11-2005, 10:46 AM | #5 |
Guest | What does the old one look like? |
| 04-11-2005, 02:13 PM | #6 |
Much better than the last one . . . and yet, why do I keep thinking of E.T. on steroids? Meh, probably just me. |
