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Here's a cool story idea(No, it's not an RP!)

04-20-2005, 06:07 AM#1
Ignitedstar
THIS IS NOT AN RP. It's just a story idea, and I want feedback.


In this world we live by three dimensions. Length, Width, and Height, but, what were to happen if the 4th demension, time, could be altered; when we know that it will only move forward? This, is the 4th demensional world...

This is a story about a young Night elven preistess named Shara, first realizes that the moon and sun have been moving backwards. After she figures out the one whose doing this, which is an evil sorceress name Arma, she banishes Shara into another world. The sorceresses power to altar the 4th demension is given to her, and she learns how important it is to keep the way things should be, without even altering time. Arma's goal is to gather enough power to go back to the Ancient's War, and change time so that she had the power of the Well of Eternity. Shara must learn how to live a 4th demensional world that ONLY she can live in and control.
04-20-2005, 10:30 AM#2
johnfn
Sounds interesting; go ahead and write it :P

I'll be waiting.
04-20-2005, 01:14 PM#3
xiash
Hmmmmmmmmm, potentially good. But don't screw up!
04-20-2005, 08:39 PM#4
NightArcher01
I agree with Xiash. sounds like it could be a good story if you write it well.
04-21-2005, 10:33 PM#5
KingGigli
*sniff sniff* not RP! KINGGIGLI MAD AT NOT RP! *battle cry, grabs a blonde chick and climbs up a building and screams "NOT RP! MAD AT NOT RP" over and over*