Romance Across Sides.

"Shh we must be quite darling." Whispered a voice in the dark.

"I know, I know. Its just I cant stop gigling!" whispered another.

"Ok. Ok, give us some light here." said the second voice.

"Very well."

A bright flash of light appears and then dims a little to reveal a female night elf with long dark green hair and a male troll with gray hair in a mohawk.

"You know we should not be doing this." Said the troll.

"I know! Thats what makes it even more naughty!" Replied the elf.

The two are clearly affectionate. This type of relationship would definetly cause death and punishment for both of them.

"Ok. We must be quite you know." Said the night elf.

"Yes we must. But I cant stop myself from just screaming when I am around you, Revanis." The troll answered.

Revanis and the troll kiss and fondle a bit more. They giggle quitely.

"Now I must put out this light before we get more...intament, Vagal."

Vagal nods to his partner as she mutters a few words and the light dissapears.



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Please tell me any spelling mistakes I will correct them.
And yes this is a dirty story I got the idea from this picture.

:( Who made that pic? my question is i thought trolls absolutely hated elves?.... o well, doesnt matter.
It seems you wrote it quite well to me (dont ask me to find spelling mistakes, im not a strong speller). Anotyher question is, is this it or is there more? either way works for me.

Actually, contrary to popular belief, trolls and night elves share 99.5% of their genes!

R O F L
This is a damn funny idea


My rating (yay!):

Before you read my rating, know that I use different scales in order to have a global rating out of 100 that takes in consideration all important parts more than the others.

Script: 17/20 — Just the idea makes it good

Descriptions: 10/20 — Short but accurate descriptions

Imagination: 14/15 — You preverted mind!

Writing skill: 5/15 — Was a bit short to say anything, but your story messed up when read aloud

Action: 2/10 — This was going way too fast!

Humor: 10/10 — 4 letters: R.O.F.L.

Transposition of the author: 0/10 — Absolutely not... but this does not count in such a story


Global rating: 58/100 — You perverted mind... but at least I enjoyed this short reding

*clicks on pic and unzip pants*
*finds out the pic was a link to www.teletubbies.com*

Lol. This was ment to be a short story. besides do you really want me to get into more detail of the troll and the night elf doing it? i think not. and you can find that picture in the Blizzard Art Gallery.