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The last bomb

04-21-2005, 09:35 PM#1
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Eric's hair hid his face, so noone could know if he was sleeping or not.

The phone rung in Eric's office. He moved a few of his several laptop computers and pulled a small high-tech phone from a drawer. The small number recognition device showed that Grant was phoning. Grant warned Eric about a new danger. Eric, as all other CIA elite agents do, had to save the world again.

Eric tapped a few keys on his computer, and saw the inside of an appartment. The appartment was full of junk, and two of the three hidden cameras were blocked by metal pieces and wires. On the third camera, Eric could see a man polishing a huge metal machine which seemed too big to fit in the small appartment. In a quick move, Eric moved his long brown hair out of his face.

After a quick investigation on his computer, Eric recognised the man next to the machine as Sir Aaron, a very dangerous criminal, known for trying to destroy the world twice and evading alone from the most reinforced jails at least five times.

Sir Aaron finally had completed his machine. He was glad that he could finally make his dream come true: destroy the planet. A simple pressure on the switch on top of his machine would trigger a protonic bomb that would react with the lava under the Earth's crust and make the whole planet disappear in a giant blast. In a quick move, Sir Aaron moved his long red hair out of his face.

Eric was not panicked at all. He even took his time. He paused to call his girlfriend on the phone and had a nice decontracted dialog with her.

Sir Aaron was boiling some water. His last wish was to drink a simple mug of coffee before dying. He was a coffeine addict. Some people called him a freak when they saw the look of his enormous eyes, that were even blood-red on the sides. This is one of the reasons why he wants to destroy the world.

Grant was panicked. He sat on a chair and closed his eyes, but nothing could let such pressure out, even if last time Eric saved the world. He may fail this time, he's just human after all.

Eric had finished his call. He sat down, took a mike, and started speaking.

Sir Aaron was hearing a voice somewhere in his machine. Something maybe went wrong. He then noticed the small camera in a corner of his appartment. The voice was not threatening, like last time, rather... laughing. Sir Aaron was totally surprised. He recognised the voice of Eric, that bloody agent, laughing at him. Suddenly, he sipped his coffee, threw the cup on the floor, and reach towards his machine.

Eric was laughing in his office. Sir Aaron was really a clever thinker, but he simply forgot to add a switch to his machine. Too bad, he forgot the most important part, he won't be able to trigger his bomb. Eric took his phone and called Grant, to tell him everything was O.K. and that he could send his men to Sir Aaron's appartment.

In a quick move, Sir Aaron moved his long red hair out of his face.
04-21-2005, 09:43 PM#2
player_72985
Rofl! That's just too funny BadFurDay...and to think this story was made all because of a conversation between you, me and johnfn ha ha ha ha. *fixes button on dooms day machine* Peace Outâ€



~BOOM~
04-21-2005, 09:45 PM#3
Guest
Indeed, that brainstorming just got a bit too concrete, I had to make a story about it :p
04-21-2005, 09:46 PM#4
KingGigli
if that were the case i would grab a gun and start shooting it, lol.
04-21-2005, 10:10 PM#5
johnfn
Oh man... Thats so great that it deserves a honarary spot in the HALL OF FAME! Maybe I'm overreacting, but it was pretty good, and it was so stupid it was funny. Good job.

Although I'm dissapointed that I played such a small role in it :P
04-22-2005, 05:24 AM#6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by johnfn
Although I'm dissapointed that I played such a small role in it :P
Yep, the hair has more importance than you in it (rofl)

Quote:
Originally Posted by johnfn
Oh man... Thats so great that it deserves a honarary spot in the HALL OF FAME! Maybe I'm overreacting, but it was pretty good, and it was so stupid it was funny. Good job.
Erm... thx!
But which hall of fame?
04-22-2005, 02:43 PM#7
JetPack
Finally a good funny story. Nice job =)
04-22-2005, 06:12 PM#8
ufo
Nice story BadFutty (eeh?) some time since i took the time to read a story, i have been in bad mood the last day. You deserve... eeh... something
04-22-2005, 07:13 PM#9
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BadFutty o_O... erm... O.K.?
Quote:
Originally Posted by ufo
You deserve... eeh... something
Great. I deserve something. Wee.
06-01-2005, 08:25 PM#10
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Quote:
Originally Posted by johnfn
Oh man... Thats so great that it deserves a honarary spot in the HALL OF FAME! Maybe I'm overreacting, but it was pretty good, and it was so stupid it was funny. Good job.

Although I'm dissapointed that I played such a small role in it :P


Dont worry, you will probably play a bigger part in the sequel! ^_^