| 05-07-2005, 06:44 AM | #1 |
Anyways, here's the story, It's about a good hearted teenager boy name Live(Ly-ve) who lives on another world. He is a very kind person, loyal, noble, and gives constuctive critism. He rarely get angry, or even mad. His dark side, naming himself Evil, which is the total opposite of him goes insane inside mind, thinking that he should be put into more use instead of just standing there in pitch black area. So, he decides to become his shadow, or evil side. One day, Live notices that his "evil" somehow came to life, as his own shadow acts on its own. He figures that his Evil talks to him often and that it is his shadow, as if it really is another person. He hates him at first, but then he starts to help him on certain situations. Evil, as his shadow can extend, contract, hold, do, and help him with anything. But, since this has happened, Live starts to get in trouble becuase of his shadow, with makes him annoying. Notice that Evil is backwards of Live, and vice versa. This is to symbolize that both of them are REALLY the opposites of eachother. LIVE/EVIL |
| 05-07-2005, 07:04 AM | #2 |
Guest | Just write that story! Noone is able to tell if it is good or not before it is written! |
| 05-07-2005, 02:18 PM | #3 |
It has potential, but cut the line about another world. and you don't have to have them named live, thats a little forced, doncha think? |
| 05-07-2005, 04:13 PM | #4 |
I say don't make threads about stories, just write them. Also, you just ruined the entire plot line for me =/. Just from now on just go ahead and write the story. |
