| 05-07-2005, 01:52 PM | #1 |
Guest | Hah! You want it! I know it! You little pervert... O my dear love I have a rose for you Here in my glove It comes from Peru I took an expensive rose So you'd make me a favour Come inside and close The big wooden door I shall show you something Hidden in my pants That lies inside, waiting For a nice romance Now I'll take it out Be ready for a surprise But please don't shout Because it is full-size Come and look closer Your face will turn red Yes, it's a voucher For a dinner at Fred's Hah! You really thought I'd tell you a perverted story? We're only on wc3c bleh... |
| 05-07-2005, 02:01 PM | #2 |
.................................................................................................... .......oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooook |
| 05-07-2005, 09:09 PM | #3 |
Character Development: 4/10, Humor 4/5, Writing Skill 13/15, Clearity 9/10, Grammar 5/5, Execution 4/5. That's 39/50. Most of that is self explanitory. Good story though. Hehe. |
| 05-07-2005, 09:17 PM | #4 |
Guest | I assume Fred's is a bondage club... |
| 05-08-2005, 09:17 AM | #5 |
I assume Fred's a donut club... |
| 05-08-2005, 09:25 AM | #6 |
o_O. |