Campaign:The Rise of the Vampires

The Rise of the Vampires is a projekt about three Vampires that want to find more members for their Clan in Icechrone.The Lich-King sends an Headhunter to kill them.The Headhunter flys with an AirBage and wants to kill them.Then they kill the Headhunter and take his AirBage ro fly to Icechone Glacier.Then they rest in a place in northrend and a second Headhunter destroys their AirBage while they are eating and then they are catched in this place in northrend.Now they must find their way to northrend once with their foots and other methods.If you want you can join my projekt as a voice actor,Modeler,skinner or if you know other things i haven't listed.If this information is not enough go to the website and then say me if you want join: http://www.freewebs.com/riseofthevampires/

So this is set in the Warcraft universe, it has the Lich King hiring TROLL Headhunters, (who'd NEVER work for him), to hunt down VAMPIRES, who don't even EXIST in the Warcraft storyline? (IIRC)
Nice. Very nice.

oh i don't know that it was in the warcraft universe.I think one of my members has sended it there.Do you know the link to this topic or whatever it is?
And I mean the Headhunters weren't Trolls but they were cryptfiends and Yes they don't exist but they have an own story in Warcraft here is it if you want to know:
Years ago Mal'ganis,a dreadlord of the Lich-King,was the Leader of the Blackfeather Clan.Then Mal'Ganis found a magical Artefakt."The Stone of Guldan".After he used this artefakt all members of his Clan transformed to mighty four-eyed blue creatures.Then his members tried to kill him to get the stone.This betrayel caused Mal'Ganis to use the artefakt to cage them into the stone as long as he lives.After he dies the four-eyed Vampires were free.The pass towards the Ice Crown Glacier seems to be frozen....Theirefor the new Blackfeather Clan Leader, Infeston, takes a secret route towards the ice crown in hope of no time spoilement.He is seeking for new Clan members in ice chrown.

But i haven't said that there were Troll Headhunters.The Lich-King hasn't hired the Troll Headhunters.The Headhunters attacking the Vampires because the Vampires flied to their Hunting Regions and rested there(And they don't like it if there are people in their Hunting regions) and not because the Lich-King has hired them.And they are not Trolls.They are Trolls with Waste Hunter skins.
Who has telled you this.This is in all parts wrong.

i really think you need a new story as Mal'Ganis was on Azeroth for a very short time. Headhunters are Jungle Trolls of the Darkspear tribe and are a part of the Horde. Crypt Fiends are undead nerubians. I doubt they would find a artifact called the Stone of Guldan, mainly because he never used one it was his staff and teaching from the demonlord Kil'jaedan which he used. there was a item called the Skull of Gul'dan but that was on draenor when it exploded, and it disappeared in the twisting nether for awhile until the demons brought it back to Azeroth and illidan consumed it. the only "vampires" in warcraft suck mana or the will of a individual out. Dreadlords destroy the will from within and Felhounds absorb the mana of enemy mages killing them horribly in the process. also Mal'ganis was a part of the Burning Legion and most notably of the Nathrezim, he was not a part of a Blackfeather Clan. also why would demon travel to icecrown glacier to find aid when the lich king is hunting down the remaining demons that are in his realm and wants to get rid of the dreadlords.

basically your campaign wont work if you are setting it in warcraft. and if you are not then create your own name for places, people and races.

You must know the story plays before Mal'Ganis was a dreadlord of the Nathrezim.
And the people of his Clan were at first normal undead.And where should you know that it doesn't gives a stone of guldan.This is a campaign about a new race.
But if this is not very good then say me another story for this Vampires.In Warcraft 1-2 were no undeads too and I don't say:"In Warcraft are no undeads because they didn't where in Warcraft 1 and 2".They were nightelfs,humans, undeads and orcs.Why not Vampires?

No undead in warcraft 2? *coughdeathknightscough*

ok excuse me!I mean warcraft 1.Or I am false with this too?
Here is a new story hope this is better:
Years ago,the orcish Warlord Gul'dan was on a expedition in northrend where he has found primitive undeads,dancing around a Mystical Water Well.After killing the undead he takes the water and makes experiments on other undeads.After a few experiments he creates blueish four eyed creatures.The gaves them the names "Vampires".Scared about their strength he caged them into a dungeon in northrend.After Gul'dan died the four-eyed blueish creatures were free.Then they shut together as Clans and fighted against other Clans of themsleves.Theirefor the Blackfeather Clan Leader, Infeston, takes a secret route towards the ice crown in hope of no time spoilement.He is seeking for new Clan members in ice chrown.

A second question:
Can you tell me where you see my campaign at first.Please tell me the link.
I hope this is a better story where this Vampires came.Can you say me another place where they can seek for new Clan members? ;)

dreadlords were BORN dreadlords. and the Nathrezim ARE dreadlords. and he has existed always in the twisting nether and was never a undead.


in warcraft 1 the orc necrolytes raised the dead, hence they are UNDEAD. in warcraft 2 there was the deathknight which was the animate CORPSE of the knights of azeroth. it too raised the dead into UNDEAD. and i have already highlighted that the only "vampaires" in warcraft are the nathrezim and felhounds. they dont drink blood they absorb other essences.


he never went to northrend for a start. all his experiments on the dead were done in draenor and in the kindgom of azeroth. undead are not primitive, they are the dead risen to attack those their master wants them to. the most north he went was the caer darrow in quel'thalas. and the furthest he went was to the tomb of sargeras where he died.

i strongly suggest you learn some lore before writing a campaign. go to www.blizzard.com and look for the history of warcraft

Ok.Can you make a better story from where this four-eyed blue Vampires come.Because I need a good story and I don't find on www.blizzard.com the story of warcraft.Plz find a good storyline.Or is it ok if I write he found a mystical water well in draenor.

Here is the new story:
Years ago,the orcish Warlord Gul'dan was on a expedition in Draenor where he has found a Mystical Water Well.Gul'dan takes the Water of the Mystical Well to experiment with undeads.After a few experiments he creates blueish four eyed creatures.He gaves them the names "Vampires".Scared about their strength he caged them into a dungeon in Draenor.After Gul'dan died,the four-eyed blueish creatures were free.Then they shut together as Clans and fighted against other Clans of themsleves.Later all Vampires fly with AirBages to northrend to settle in this region.Theirefor the Blackfeather Clan Leader, Infeston, takes a secret route towards the ice crown in hope of no time spoilement.He is seeking for new Clan members in ice chrown.

If this story is not good enough send me your own story how can it be.

That's better. I still think you'd be better off setting it somewhere other than the Warcraft universe entirely, but at least the story you now have doesn't clash with any of the established Warcraft story, as far as I know...

Yes.But I think I let it in Warcraft because the Vampires are no new race.
They are kinds of undead.But they fight against the undeads of the Lich-King.
It is the same with the "Forsaken".They fight against the Lich-Kings troops
and most of them are banshees and destroyers.But they are undeads too.
You understand what I mean? ^_^
Or I rename the Vampires to Demons.

Here is the last change on my story hope it is better now:
Years ago,the orcish Warlord Gul'dan was on a expedition in Draenor where he has found a Mystical Water Well.Gul'dan takes the Water of the Mystical Well to experiment with undeads.After a few experiments he creates blueish four eyed creatures.In awareness that he would die he cages the four eyed demons into a dungeon until he dies,so that his vengeance even continues after he dies.Then Gul'dan dies and the demons weren't caged anymore but they forget him and their mission.Some of them settled in northrend and some of them remained in Draenor their offical homeland.Theirefor the Blackfeather Clan Leader, Infeston, takes a secret route towards the ice crown in hope of no time spoilement.He is seeking for new Clan members in ice chrown.

Is this story better now?And now the Vampires are Demons and not Vampires. ^_^