Idea!!

Well, i have thought up a small story i was wondering if it's any good, here it is:

War Of Suspicion
Story:

There was once two kingdoms:
1)The kingdom of Alatra
2)The kingdom of Saltre
These two kingdoms were once the best of friends and they prospered in peace and trade.But, one stormy day a evil orc warlock named "Na'bak" confused the minds of the two lords of these kingdoms, and they were driven into madness and cruelness.The two kingdoms constantly acused eachother of horrible deeds and they began to argue over land,money,and food.The kingdom of Alatre's king "Belgunn" had betrayed the king of Saltre (Mul'rah) by secretly invading his land.Soon after this war broke out between the two and they begin to send out fierce armies to destroy eachother

Chars:
Luman:Main char and is a strong half-elf male archer that came to the land seeking peace after a live of misery (His background doesn't come up in the story, for he never allows himself to talk about it.)He likes to show off and is sarcastic.

Mael'lock:A old and wise human sorcerer (male) he came from the Saltre to live in Alatre.He is very modest and not cocky.No one really knows what his past life was except he fled from it.Powerful in magely arts.

Na'bak:Evil orc warlock that started the war in the first place (not one of the playable heros) he is very evil and cruel he is also very powerful.

Balgunn:The king of Alatre his mind is twisted and dark because of Na'Bak's sorcerey.He is very demanding and is not very tolerant.Very confident and strong.

Mul'rah:King of Saltre he is cocky and prideful he doesn't ever give up and is known among the peasants to be a cruel man.Very strong.

Who you play:
You play as the kingdom of Alatre and you shift back and forth to Luman & Mael'lock.You must fend of the Saltre invaders in first playable map.



That's pretty all that i've come up with pls post your thoughts.