I find the arm on the foremost torso to be disturbingly thin. There are a few other issues here and there, like anatomy and proportion, but everything looks fairly solid as a whole.
One thing I noticed is that your range of greys is quite limitted. Your darks need to be darker for added contrast, and a few more intermediary tones in the picture would help things to look more volumetric. Although, I would say having more contrast in this case is a more pressing issue.
Otherwise, nice stuff. It's more difficult to effectively criticize a sketch compared to a finished work, except to offer generalized advice. Out of curiosity, how long did you spend on this page? |