Latest WIP and real crap

Heres What im currently workin on... up to now i really like it: its going to be one of my best pics maybe... Please gimme some comments and critics on this ;)



btw he was jumping and now hes fallin, the background is missing so it could look weird...

Heres an older one i like cause of the dynamic this pic has


And also heres some crap i dont know why im posting it, its not too good but feel free to comment everything u can see here ;)




Damnit.. no time to resize the pics... so only post the first one and tonight the others...

Accch!

Don... make a pre-sketch first... do thumbnails to get the pose down.

This will not be your best work, and I'm pretty sure you see a reason why.

Don't start adding details until you have the rest down.

His pose is lacking motion... the left arm and torso are what ruin the effect of the fall.

I don't want to say it, but the best thing to do would be to start over.

Do some thumbnails to get the pose down... one that screams "action"... and then presketch the figure... after that... block out some background shapes... add detail to the figure... and then to the background... then take care of the lighting...

None of this post is meant to be taken in a negative manner... I just wish I could express what I'm trying to say better.

You want to improve, don't be afraid to do something over as many times as you need to make it right.

icbm1987

Use simple shapes to create a complicated picture then when you are done critique yourself. Dunno what else to say.

resize :|

sorry for the size :( did it late but did it... also added the missin pics i "promised" u.

yesterday i started trawing with my father's wacom, like it but dont really get how to use it... some comments on the pics in my first post, and on these here with wacom if u want to




i feel lost with this unnatural pen^^ and maybe u remember, me and the colors were no friends^^