| 06-24-2005, 06:37 PM | #1 |
Yep its a remake of my female orc blademaster. ^^b Went back to the blue pen and inking. Was a fresh new thing since Ive been working on wacom lately and killing myself. I got some armour refs and wanted a more evolved orc armor. Like as if the orc's evolved while keeping the barbaric orc feel. Its a symbolism that I evolved too. ^^b Had to put a dead elf... he's cool. I like blood and stuff like that. 1337troll She has more orcish features now. it's my first serious pic in a while and its to start off the summa Hope you guys enjoy. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/19767038/ To rate my picture: http://www.wc3campaigns.com/gallery/...sort=1&cat=505 yea I became a DA whore. now for some dota... and booz and drugz ST_JEAN BABY!!! |
| 06-24-2005, 08:21 PM | #2 |
Very nice, this pic looks much better. The first thing that hit me was the armor, im rather impressed with the way you handled it. She looks elegant, but the armor gives her the orcish broad shoulders and buff physique. The face, however, drags the quality of the whole thing down. The head is extremely small, and that is the primary flaw. Also, the hair, it doesnt seem to wrap around her head, but looks like it was just sort of placed on top like a hat. She seems to have extremely soft and rounded features for an orc. The shape of her head, and her mouth make it look more like a childs face and that detracts from the badassness of the blood on her blade and the head in her hand. Just to nitpick, the blade has only a little tip in the ground and even tho it looks heavy as hell is standing up. Maybe a little more of the blade could be put in the ground to look more balanced. The flag has a good effect on it, but the problem is with the design on it. Those line things dont wrap around the form of the flag but just look really flat. Same goes for those rings in the armor, but thats just extreme details heh. I might do a paintover to show some of the stuff thats just too weird to explain... Good job overall. PS: Forgot to mention, I like the details giving this a modern feel. Primaraly the thong and the high heel boots. Well done. |
| 06-24-2005, 11:02 PM | #3 |
Heh Cool Kirtar. Now in my defence... ^^b The head cud be a tad bigger but I calculated the proportions and it seemed ok but the hell. The anime hair... a similarity I had to keep... I dunno I dunt do hair reallistic. I agree the face is something I wasnt satisfied with. The innocently psycho look I like but the two small lines besides her mouth that I HATE! It makes her look too old. The smoothness is anime kinda... and I wanted to keep her secksy. A blade that size isnt that hevay, plus she's holding it but thats I agree is minor details. The design on the banner was last minute composition decision, lack of lines in that area wud draw the attention there for nuthing so had to put em in, tried to give em volume but yea... was hard. Those lil modern details are just some sweet canday trademark ^^b not really but i like to so. Bonne St-jEan Baptiste TLM! |
| 06-25-2005, 12:26 AM | #4 |
Yeah... Um Candy... It's cool... but post a picture with an image tag... And I don't know... the old one is still sexier... this one has a lob-sided mouth... and isn't quite as curvy... The armor is tight... I'm sorry... I'll try to do some actual crits later. icbm1987 |
| 06-25-2005, 02:28 AM | #5 |
hey thats some cool shit. likin the armor. the face is kinda ugly though. i still like the old sexy non orcish face. the fuckable one. anyway, crits! the hand doesnt look like its holding the weapon, like its just floating there. might wanna fix that. i'm not really digging the perspective of the feet either. it's off by a lot, and i'm not sure how to explain how to fix it. man, i kinda wanna do a redesign of your picture. gimme a few hours and i'll get back to you. |
| 06-25-2005, 04:39 PM | #6 |
Everybody seemed to like it when I draw big boobies and not orcish orcs ^^b. When I posted that pic they said: OMG she's not an orc! wtf! She's jst hot! MEH! icbm: heh dunt sweat i can wait. beam: the hand is just kinda touching the weapon lol *¯ *.¯ storm: symetrical is so not in. :D one of her side is more armoured cuz she attacks generally from that side. in general: I agree the face isn't a success I put tusks and made it too orcish... or what. Heh now look at my avatar... (im thinkin of changin every few months). Now some boring shit: I got drunk so bad and my head hurt so bad and it was awesome... met with tons of friends in which some weren't supposed to be there! Rock concert and public drinking... |
| 06-26-2005, 06:12 PM | #7 |
Guest | Keep the old face, but the new armor....seriously...this face is so screwed-up...even for a orc. You just wish that they did some female orcs in wc3 so you would have something to compare at. Also bigger boobs and stuff. Just because they're orcs, doesn't mean they can't be sexy. And plus you would think that orcs are supposed to have bigger boobs, you know what I mean? The armor is good, but she's GOT to be sexy. That's part of the appeal to everything. Like you know, almost every female character in da blizz's got sex appeal. That's the main thing in drawing females...I mean that is a basic every artist needs to know...right? |
| 06-26-2005, 06:38 PM | #8 | |
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| 06-27-2005, 12:12 PM | #11 |
hey thats one sweet design. Actully that is one damn sexy design. I really that armor skirt. I would lose the flag tho. The arm looks kind of broken and in a very uncomfortable position. The elbow pad is directly behind and the fore arm is in pronation.... I don't think the fore arm can twist that much without discomfort. Ahh its too hard to explain. It just looks broken:o You have to watch out that pronation ( thumb side inward toward body) and supination thingy (thumbs facing out ward.) It really changes the relation of the forearm and upper arm. Also it changes the shape of the forearm. I notice that in Supination the forearm flattens out and in Pronation the forearm swells up and turns more cylindrical. One trick I found is, if the thumb faces the same direction as the deltoid then its in supination and vice versa. You can use the upper arm as a guide for supination and pronation. The biceps is always going to be in front of the elbow, and deltiod on the outer side ( between biceps and elbow.) You just have to figure out the relationship of the thumb and upperarm, and you can find out if it is Supinated or pronated! W00t! What the hell did I just type. Basically what im saying is watchout for the forearm. It's a tricky bastard. Also her left leg ( our right ) looks wonky. Isn't suppose to be more curvy and shit. |
| 06-27-2005, 02:14 PM | #12 |
what's with all these asian babes avatars! |
| 06-29-2005, 01:35 AM | #13 |
Meh, I must be the only one that doesn't feel she's orcish enough! For extra orced-ness, I suggest a longer face - really, I think that's about all you'd need. But I get the feeling you won't be going that route now, eh? Oh, and muscles. At least some ab muscles in this picture. |
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| 06-29-2005, 03:36 PM | #15 |
Thanks marco and kimchi. The position looked ok but when I did it.. omg! Life drawing... I should do studies this summer. On the first of July (my bday) I'll change my avy. Just to get some change ^^b too bad we can't change user titles... nehow any1 wanna start the A.B.A club? Asian Babes Avatar club ^o^!! |
