| 06-28-2005, 04:09 AM | #1 |
another vector. of a car. a Datsun Z 260. and probably the first car that i'll get, if i could find it (manual hopefully too!). if i don't then i'll get a '86 Ford F-150 5-speed transmission. :P ![]() for the inconviently large version of it http://www.deviantart.com/view/19961423/ after finishing it... i decided to make it into a sig. (see sig for detail. :P) and then i scanned this because i can! one of those cards for those arcade games where it keeps track of your car and it's tune up. http://img214.echo.cx/my.php?image=w...sunz2403sq.jpg obviously in reality, a Datsun can't get that much horsepower... EDIT: WHOOPS! too big... :P time to fix them |
| 06-28-2005, 04:59 AM | #2 |
Quite nice, I like the way you define all the seperate shapes, but it doesnt have any highlights. I would suggest throwing in a couple birght yellows and whites. Also, cropping the thing would really help it, because the composition is uninteresting and dull. There is 3 points fighting for attention and its dragging the image down. |
| 06-28-2005, 05:18 PM | #3 |
well, i don't what the three points are, but i decided to take out the city. :P ![]() |
| 06-28-2005, 05:53 PM | #4 |
Much better, previously the composition just led the eye off the page but its better now. I like the highlights too, looks great. |
| 06-28-2005, 06:19 PM | #5 |
highlights on the windshield! |
