Man With Smoking Barrell

Translation: Opening: "Over Your Dead Body"

Cover/introduction art for cyberpunk graphic novel/comic I'm making. Feedback more than welcome :)

it miss details, I think. I mean, the lines are too thick. Especially for the gun, the head, the feet.

The very meaning of the picture is to play with as small details as possible :) Mess around with light and shadows.

it looks like one of the pictures you take and use photoshop effects to change it to like an outline

I think there's a better way to get the kind black white dominant feel you're aiming for.

Determinating a light source and playing with the lines accordingly.

reminds me of frank millers stuff. i think this would be a lot cooler if youd have a definite light source or a light coming from a different angle. looks like this guys in a white room. you know, those rooms that photographers use to take pictures of stuff.

Yep, I know those rooms... Thanks for the crits, all.