Ghost

just did this today



why is there an ungodly long wait for EDITING a post? gotta watch out for those edit post flooders... yep they spam edits... hope that changes...

Err... she needs a neck.

And a good face perspective. Also, note that normal humans don't bend from the hips, they bend continuosly. You made her with a broken spine. The coloring is good, except the chest plate.

err... her armor is going over her neck

and her armor on her back is straight (not conforming to her body) Her back is still curving but the armor is on the outside so that is straight.

Err, judging by where the shoulder is (even if it is pushed up higher) I still cant see where the neck would be.

Also the last dude was referring to the hips, which made the spine look broken.

maybe the reference will explain... its a stock photo

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/2363305/

if you still don't understand from that then I'll try and explain it.

Yep there it is.

So the only problems are the face, as its kinda... not perspectived right.

eh?

heh someone else said the left arm didn't bend enough.
aw but I modelled the right arm after mine

She needs a real pose O_O. Those legs are pretty good though. Just don't like the length on them.