A comic!

08-12-2005, 11:00 PM	#1
Shadow_Strike	About orks, no not warcraft orks. Made completely on Flash Mx, with lots of errors. few hours over 2 days. Just some stupid humor.

08-13-2005, 03:16 AM

Candy_Warlock

Lol. Your comic's humorous idea is pretty clichÃ©, the silent frame is way overused but can still be exploited in a good way but requires more originality. Apart from that, I find the art to be pretty appealing. I like it. The rudimentary coloring fits the loose style.
I suggest continuing drawing these ''comics'' (so you can also improve the jokes) and practice traditionnal methods (life drawing and the sort) on the side to improve overall drawing skills and improve your style. Then when we're constantly entertained and distracted by the comics, you hone your skills and unleash your godliness upon us with a great picture and the world will seem to end til Spiderman comes and saves the day.

08-13-2005, 03:58 AM	#3
Shadow_Strike	Hence the stupid humor part. Erm, this was just a random filler comic for another comic that has nothing to do with this. Geoffry the Rock! (And yes, I knew it was over done a billion times, because Ive seen it a billion times) Good news is is that that (whoa, weird wording) comic was given 3.5 thumbs up! Out of how many thumbs I dunno, and do you count hands?

08-14-2005, 01:13 AM	#4
Afronight_76	funny

08-14-2005, 05:48 AM

Shadow_Strike

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wormskull

it needz more action n dynanism! usually the characters dont change their stance, thats the kind of comic that could be converted to words without any major changes, both comics. but if you would've added a guy showing his fatal cobra strike from an interesting angle to the viewer then it would be priceless. :)

Yeah thats my comic, go watch anime or something, maybe thatll be better.

Also, I dont focus on the art, notice how the characters are a FUNGUS and a ROCK.