| 10-13-2005, 06:32 AM | #1 |
Hello. I would like to start a single player saga called Crusade Serenity, in otherwords quest for peace. I will start off with the story ------------ In the world of Kazar'hamen there is peace among everyone as right now. Ohzak the dwarven miner in Gyremsar is a profound, intelegent and well spoke of dwarf. He spoke to his king Eldawin Grymskarge about different modern topics almost every day. Ohzak fancied leather armour and a small dagger. He was not too strong, but a valiant dwarf in deed. Adwella Reithal, an elven peasant in Velasaenne, a very shy girl, she enjoys writing and playing the Kromsaii (An intrament that plays slow drumming sounds). She wears a leather girdle around her waist, the rest of her is covered in a whitish cloth, a gift from her grandmother, Princess Ameara. When she was a little girl she found a magic stone in the forest of Ezell, many years after she found out by the Elven Godesses that it weilds lightning and fire and is called Qeji (Kwegei) Weldamir is a human warrior from Khardsvelle. He enjoys playing the guitar and practicing swordwork and blacksmithing. His father Gereiath was a farmer and taught Weldamir lots and lots of sword work on his spare time. Weldamir carried with him 3 sacks, one for food, one for water and one for the single diamond he charrished from his slaughtered wife Affilia he hopes one day it will come to good use. Those are the characters of the story. Now the real story. 114 years from the age of this story, a young girl Jessaline was doing usual chores for her mother, in the garden she was picking weeds. She was 15 and a half at the time. She stumbled on a flower, it was nothing at first, so she picked it up. A sharp shock ran threw her veigns as she screemed. (This is a ways away from their house) She saw the flower turn grey, it started to evaporate and she could feal torrents of energy surge threw her body. She fainted in an instance, she finaly awoke 14 days after, when they offered her food she wouldn't eat. When the days where over she wouldn't sleap. And all she did for years was sit and cry in her palms. She told no one of what happened. She kept it a dark secret. No one noticed until signs started apearing, when she finaly began to talk, sleep and do normal things, when she got angry her hands became blue and her eys jet black, she weilded unimaginable power. However she still was young, the energy was young, it was no more power than twice of what a baby can let out. But as the days went on she became so angry, for no reason at all. Insane she went and she took hatred to her father. She slaughtered him in his sleap, and took the life of her mother. Her son escaped (great, grandfauther of Weldamir) and she envoked havoc on all the town, flame erected from the ground as she started casting craft that no witch has ever heard of. She killed thousands of people until finaly, Agorias Elvantine (grandfather of Ohzark) constructed a powerful devise called the Embroiderkof and sealed Jessaline into a magical prison of torment under the vast sea for eternity. Years after, aproximatly 45, a young man by the name of Vadrek Reithal (Grandfather of Adwella) aproched the shores of Aquezine and triped over a piece of metal when wandering the shores for his late night walk. He didn't mind at first, but the chunck became more viewable as the tides went, days after he could see the entire thing almost. A shaft of blue metal emcarved with golden seals. Mist inside he could see nothing. He rammed it with a shovel. Nothing happened, he reported it to the Government, and the Police. They became so curious everyone in the town started trying to break it. One day it cracked. A burst of sonic energy raged out of the seal impaling peasants into their home walls. mist explored every corner and a thump rippled across the air as little Jessaline fell out. Her skin as red as steaming coals. She wasn't locked in a freazing chamber, but a heat chamber ment to melt away anything in a matter of seconds. She was barely scarred.... The story will unravel later.. i need assistance Involvment needed: (i can skin, trigger and terrain) -Cinematic Desiner -Modeler maybe. -Triggere -A great cinematic producer -Story writer, Creativit-er? Playable Characters: -Ohzark (Why? because he wants to find out the truth about his great grandfauther, and eventualy is needed to help fight.. someone... ^_^) -Adwella (Why? She also wants to find out what really happened to her grandfather, and eventualy gets involved.) -Weldamir (Why> Because he wants to seek out his still living grandfather and help out in any way.) NOTE: This is not a fighting game, it has little fighting but thats not the point. Let me tell you know this is going to be a puzzle game that has you thinking, alot. Hopefully it will turn out fresh and original. Most of the time your wandering around with someone figuring out quests, most of the fighting is done with the story, such as jessaline. Many of the quests are going to require you to sit and think. I need a team that thinks they can take this challenge. |
| 10-13-2005, 07:22 PM | #2 |
I need some help.. i hhave a long storyline written down in a folder. |
