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12-21-2005, 04:06 AM#1
falcoknight
I, realised, i have never really posted any art here... hes a quick thing i made, took about 15 minutes, lil cartoon orc. Its not very good, im better at drawing with a pencil, but eh :P

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thumbnailed it for you, your picture was too big. next time, do it yourself please, there is a previeuw post option for a reason.
-erwt.
12-21-2005, 04:53 AM#2
icbm1987
This looks kind of burn/dodged-ish... Which is kind of a no-no in this field.

Please... oh god... please, work some more on this to fix it up... it could be really nice if you did.

First thing... Smoothing... this could do with lots of smoothing... it's amazing what you can do with a larger brush size and fewer brush strokes... it is indeed... just play around with this image some more.

The tusks... they look fine... but need smoothing... but the teeth as compared to them? Pshaw! You can do better! each and every tooth needs as much effort as the tusks get!

I know you can do it!

icbm1987
12-21-2005, 05:21 AM#3
falcoknight
mm i understand what your talking about.. but i did what i was aiming for, i didn't want something realistic.. i like the effect i used, and btw there was no dodge or burn used, i used different colors and oppacity
12-21-2005, 05:54 AM#4
falcoknight
Erm.. well, i kept the old one, but i experemented with slurring the whole thing and smoothing it.. i like the old version better however :P

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AGAIN! either post smaller images or use thumbnails.
-erwt.
12-21-2005, 06:52 AM#5
Werewulf
nice, abit uneven at some places, and the teeth and gums need abit of work, apart from that its cool
12-21-2005, 08:07 AM#6
falcoknight
yeah.. i rushed them.. i didn't really care for it.. it was a messy style.. perhaps i should submit some drawinns
12-21-2005, 12:52 PM#7
TDR
Oh my god, NEVER EVER use smudge for blending colors. It looks so clumsy and childish like that.
12-21-2005, 02:15 PM#8
icbm1987
The best tool for blending colours is the eyedropper and brush.

IMO

icbm1987
12-21-2005, 03:00 PM#9
erwtenpeller
that is, indeed, best. Jacinthe said it, B sais it, i preach it.
12-21-2005, 06:15 PM#10
falcoknight
talk about the first one lol, the second one was just an experement!
12-21-2005, 11:33 PM#11
erwtenpeller
the edges averywhere are too unclear, though at the thumbnail image you can see the overall composition is quite good.