Zombies (Comic)

Just something I assed up. The coloring sucks.

Well that sure is, nice. But whats with the sudden change in skin color and stuff, did she just die 5 seconds later? Cuz zombies all ways look like bloody deformish once they die. The only thing that can happen is for it 2 get WORSE. Otherwise... lol. Thats just a lil constructive critisism (thats what it is spose to be depending how you take it)

Its suppose to show a later point in time.
WOw that was fast though.

Ok, well that makes alot more sense.

the comical timing could be better, you give away everything at the verry beginning of the first frame. maybe this should really be a 3-frame strip. it doesnt read nicely enough. you say the sudden change is to depic a later moment in time, but this isnt noticable anywhere in the strip. its unclear even.

agreed with erwtje. Its a funny joke but i had to read the text and look at the pics 2!!! yea 2 times.

noxer, you must speak dutch! how exilerating.