1) The rock wall really kills it for me. I suppose that's mainly because, being a modeler, the poor model makes me feel itchy all over. The dragons are a nice touch, however the trunks of the trees need better UVMaps.
2) Not a whole lot to complain about here. Add some pools of water on the ground here and there. If it's raining, water's has got to flow downhill somewhere.
3) The sky, oh the sky! Add some variation to the stairs, the single sized dots relatively evenly spaced is giving me that itchy-all-over feeling again. Add snow to the doodad in the foreground, with snow all over they look really out of place without. Work on those mountains in the background, they also look out of place.
On the whole, not bad. Shows a lot of promise, however if you can model (or know someone who can) you'll do a lot better. Great work thus far. |