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River in the Middle of the forest

01-07-2006, 03:26 AM#1
RDX2


Comments and sugestions please
01-07-2006, 04:50 AM#2
Zeal_
Where'd the dirt come from?
Palm trees and fur trees dont blend in good to me.
Catails on the waterfall?
On the right side, after the stump, its get empty.
I dont mind the giant mushroom. I like mushrooms. ;P
01-07-2006, 08:08 AM#3
RainWithin
1. The Catails on the waterfall is very un-realistic

2. Jungle combined with forest? (Palm trees and fur) very weird :P

There is some more but those two points are most negative I can see in this picture. You did a pretty good job in making it look "compact" if you know what I mean

Good try :) you will make a better one next time, continue with the good work :D
01-07-2006, 09:14 AM#4
Xeth-Ban
well cant say i like it but good try i think it isnt dark enough, and it doesnt have any fog(cant see any), and i agree with most others on this thread to, try smoothing the river banks alittle more to
01-07-2006, 12:13 PM#5
[Death]
The coral, palm trees, and the blue glowing mushroom should be removed, they don't fit in in a forest like that. The world tree is a little too random, and it's the only world tree in there, so you could remove that as well. But other than that, I rather like it, it's not too bad.
01-07-2006, 03:14 PM#6
RDX2
Quote:
Originally Posted by Zeal_
Where'd the dirt come from?
Palm trees and fur trees dont blend in good to me.
Catails on the waterfall?
On the right side, after the stump, its get empty.
I dont mind the giant mushroom. I like mushrooms. ;P

This is my first try so thx for the comments. what kind of trees you think i should use?, and thats a world tree.
01-07-2006, 03:28 PM#7
Deitri
Very cool river.
But, wtf is the Big Mushroom there?
I really liked it
01-07-2006, 06:47 PM#8
ghenjis
Pretty good, though some doodads are out of place. For a good try it great, here's a green :)
01-07-2006, 08:01 PM#9
PlasticAngel
Next person who doesn't crop their bloody pics is gonna get it! (I'll amputate your left nut)
01-07-2006, 10:07 PM#10
RDX2
When you say crop you mean get ride of the top bar and start menu?
01-07-2006, 10:33 PM#11
PlasticAngel
Yes.
01-08-2006, 06:36 AM#12
Hemlock
I go with death in this picture.

also, the tree at the front (left side) does really not blend good with the watter, like the deforms do, I suggest ussing something different.