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Turd in the sky

01-13-2006, 06:46 PM#1
TDR
a little craphole i'm working on, just for the heck of it. Still WIP...



I don't feel like adding any more collors (other than these). Any suggestions?
01-13-2006, 06:57 PM#2
PlasticAngel
Mabe some light rays coming through that hole. Make that red light rays :D
01-13-2006, 07:06 PM#3
TDR
red light will ruin everything, red dosen't fit in here. I was thinking of making rays, but I don't know...I shall see what others think.
01-13-2006, 07:37 PM#4
Whitehorn
Your trademark evil grinning skull seems to be missing.
01-13-2006, 08:07 PM#5
Candy_Warlock
The green shading in the middle is a bit too strong. I think the green is awesome and the ambiance is great. No rays and red. Add some small dragons flying towards the light and play with the dynamics by using a long tail and dark colours.
01-13-2006, 09:08 PM#6
TDR
Aye, some dragons will do fine. And you're right about the strong highlits, I'll calm them down.
01-13-2006, 09:21 PM#7
LightKirtar
Let me start off with: Hell yes!
This is what im talkin about man. This is a complete leap forward from the last enviroments I saw from you. Now, for the rougher part.
First off, the contrast needs to stay. The bright point in the center draws the attention and thats fine. The blue part in the top right should go, its taking attention with a brighter tone and it is losing some of the ambience. However, red would actually bump this piece up quite a bit. It needs a bit of color in it. Right now, there is no focal point that just grabs the viewer. I really like some of the experimentation in shapes going on, but the area towards the left could just use a few of those bright green lights along the outer edge of the shapes. I think some subtle red in either the darker or the lighter areas could give this piece just what it needs.

This was just a buncha random thoughts from the image composed into a butchered and bloody paragraph. If you can understand it, cheers.
01-13-2006, 09:37 PM#8
TDR
That blue part has to go indeed, I first didn't noticed how it draws the attention. I know it needs more colors, but I didn't wanted to use much collors in this one...though...red and green are contrasty, but after all I shall give it a little try, who knows, mabye it will be better. Thanks for stoping by.
01-13-2006, 10:52 PM#9
erwtenpeller
01-15-2006, 04:54 PM#10
icbm1987
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01-16-2006, 12:52 AM#11
KingGigli
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01-16-2006, 03:50 PM#12
Tim.
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