Hello bloodslaughter,
Too bad you're not continuing part 2. It's always a pain to loose someone who makes cinematics :(
About the cinematic:
• It was kinda boring, but thats the story, maybe you shouldve skipped some of it, watching 8234 dwarfs and on knock on the door isnt that fun.
• Camera movement was kind of choppy, you waited too long between camera changes (you shouldnt have camera changes without instant change or fade filters in gui at all, since it will look choppy without a system) which made them stop and continue another path. Made it double choppy
• Models were nice, liked them alot, but maybe they didnt quite fit to the environment
• Music was ok in most cases, but some choices were a bit bad. I know you didnt want to use copyrighted music, and surely I aint the guy to tell you to do so. Too bad david stopped making the music.
• Terrain was kinda nice in most cases, but lacked atmosphere a bit.
• Voice acting was brilliant (except darky, as said before :)), it was really a big plus.
Overall I think it could've had some improvement, too bad you won't make part 2 as it would (ithink) be a much better watch.
Edit: What do I read now? You ARE continuing it? great. Simply great :) just dont make it such a long wait as the first time please :) | 
