| 01-25-2006, 08:42 PM | #1 |
Hello, i'm Xzibit, i've deccided to make a movie - cinematic on a Human vs Orc story. It's got heavy combat and lots and lots of action. Aftermath of the second war By Xzibit --- The story is long, so hopefully the movie is too. -- Aftermath of the second war : The devastating second war agaist the orcish horde left the Alliance of Lordaeron in a state of and dissary. The Bloodthristy orcs, led by the mighty warchief, Orgrim Doomhammer, not only smash there way through the dwarf-held lands of Khaz modan, but had razed meny of lordaeron's central provinces as well. The unrealenting orcs even succeeded in ravaging the elves' remote kingdom of Quel'Thalas before rampage was fianlly stoped. The Alliance forces under Sir Lothar Managed to push Doomhammer's clans out of Lordaeron and back into the orc-controlled lands of Azeroth. Lothar's forces surrounded the orcs' volcanic citadel of Blackrock Spire and laid siege to their defenses. In a last-ditch effort, Doomhammer and his lieutenants staged a daring charge from the spire and clashed with Lothar's paldians the center of the burning stepps. Doomhammer and Lothar sqaured off in a titanic battle that left both mighty combantats battered and drained. Though Doomhammer narrowly succeeded in vaquishing Lothar, the great hero's death did not effect the warchief had hoped for. -- -- This isn't the full story but it's a good summary of it. -- Please post what you think about it and give me some suggestions about the story that seem cool (don't want to take ideas just want to get ideas and put them together) -- I'll put some pictures up as soon as possible and will give the rateing how far it is from done soon. â*Please Reply i really want to know what you guys think of itâ* ![]() |
| 01-26-2006, 03:32 PM | #2 |
Seems good so far, glad to see another cinematic circling the warcraft story line. Remember though, action isn't everything in a cinematic. I like the story, I hope to hear more of it. |
| 01-26-2006, 05:05 PM | #3 |
So we have the background of the story, what about the actual story? I love plots based on warcraft universe. |
| 01-26-2006, 09:18 PM | #4 |
Here some other parts of the story -- I'm doing the stroy first and thinking of stuff before i really get into the cinematic - i've done some of the begganing. -- Anyways here's more part of the story - Yet again, please reply and tell me if its good!! Thank you kindly Aftermath of the second war -- (contuined) Turalyon, Lothar's most trusted lieutenant, look up Lothar's bloodstrained shield and rallied his grief-stricken brethren for a vicous counterattack. Under the ragged standards of both Lordaeron and Azeroth, Turalyon's troops slaughtered the bulk of Doomhammer's remaining forces in a glorious but terrible rout. There was nothing left for the regged, scatterd orc survivors but to flee to the last standing bastion of the orcish - the dark portal. Turalyon and hes warriors chased the remaining orcs through the festering Swamp of Sorrows and into the corrupted Blasted Lands where the dark partol stood. There, at the foot of the colossal portal, the broken horede and the rugged Alliance clash in what would be the last, bloodiest battle of the Second War. Outnumbered and driven mad by the curse of their bloodlust, the orcs inevitable feel before the wrath of the Alliance. Doomhammer was taken prisoner and escorted to Lordaeron while his broken clans were rounded up and hauled north - back to Lordaeron. ---- -- Please tell me what you think! -- I really want your guys thoughs about the story so far! ![]() |
| 01-26-2006, 11:27 PM | #5 |
Sounds nice, however, run spellcheck whenever your done writing, people do notice those tiny typos. (Like me, grammar freak) But i hope you did not forget about Khadgar, the one who closed the dark portal after the second war. And hes also one of the people who goes into the dark portal in the expansion... And dont forget about the founding of nethergarde keep... I read lore to much. = / |
| 01-27-2006, 12:07 AM | #6 |
They will be more of the stroy tommarow at least - still gatta think. Just to let you guys know - this is a cenamtic for Human with seveal parts. The next cinematic that will follow will be the Orcs and so on. I might not contuine though if it turns out bad but ill do my best. Thanks guys, contuine on telling me if its good, Thanks! †Xzibit† ![]() PS. Don't know if this is the wrong thing to post at but what the heck, --How do you inport sounds - like music? if you can tell me that will be great, thanks dudes and dudets |
| 01-27-2006, 05:30 AM | #7 |
great story, i to love stuff based on the warcraft storyline, but run spell check. pimp my ride ![]() |
| 01-27-2006, 12:22 PM | #8 | |
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Import sounds just like everything else. Then open them in the sound editor. |
| 01-27-2006, 12:26 PM | #9 |
Sounds good, hope itll be good :) goodluck |
| 01-27-2006, 10:08 PM | #10 |
Well i'm sure you want to know more of it?? well sure, here's more of the story. (Thanks Zeal too i didn't know how heh..) and thanks too you all guys for likeing it. I'll do my soul best with it. Thanks again.Aftermath of the second war .. (Contuined) --- Next Chapter: Beyond the Dark Portal. Only a few months after Nethergarde's completion, the energies of the dark portal coalesced and opened up a new gateway to Draenor. The remaining orc clans, under the leadership of the elder shaman, Ner'zhul, charged forth into Azeroth once again. Intent on stealing number of magical artifacts that might increase Ner'zhul's power, the orcs planned to open up new portals in Draenor that would allow them to escape their doomed red world forever. Covinced that Ner'zhul was planning a new offensive agaist the Alliance, King Terenas of Lordaeron send his armies into Draenor to end the orcish threat once and for all. Let by Khadgar and General Turalyon, the Alliance forces clashed with the orcs acrossed a burning landscape. Even with the aid of the elven Ranger Alleria, the dwarf Kurdran and the veteran soldier Danath, Khadgar was unable to prevent Ner'zhul from opening his portals to other worlds. More of it is coming up tommarow - and hopfully screen shots! --Please tell me what you think so far!! thanks!! ![]() PS. How can i inport voices - i found out how to do sound but how do i make it in sound like when a units talking? Next is that i can take pictures but can't look at them it comes up like i belive WTG.? Belive that's it. Can somone one help me on those, Thanks you so much if you can cause i got pictures to show!! |
| 02-02-2006, 07:34 PM | #11 |
Alright, well i've deccided to make it called: Aftermath of the second war: Sweet Pandemonium. The movie is going to be numbered in sections *chapters* First chapter: Sweet Pandemonuim. Second Chap: Chop Suey. Third: World of Alliance. ---- Second movie titled: Gul'dan and the Betrayal. Still i ask the following questions - How do i make the pictures show? it comes up a GTA File or somthing *don't know if that has anything to do with it* but i can't look at it for some reason. I found a sounds and stuff so i'm ok there - right now it's looking really good and have some screen shots i want to show you guys and ladys ![]() |
| 02-02-2006, 08:01 PM | #12 |
tga files can be viewed by programs like adobe photoshop. But what do you mean with "How do I make the pictures show?" ? |
| 02-06-2006, 11:29 PM | #13 |
Alright thanks - Cause when i went to the folder i couldn't see them (meaning the picture not the file) But now i can, thanks. Anyways pictures will be showed in due time. Sorry for the not reply soon internet went down I'll show pictures possibly FRIDAY |
| 02-07-2006, 05:08 AM | #14 |
I think it sounds like a very good idea, but if your doing it by yourself, it might be a good idea to team up with a few people. Then again, do it by yourself and you'll get all the publicity, heh. To make make a suggestion, if your going to do the aftermath of the second war, I would particulary be interested in seeing Ner'zul's downfall by Archimond to the Lich King and banished to Azeroth. Good luck with it and hope it goes smooth for you. |
| 02-21-2006, 02:14 AM | #15 |
You've got a point, but it will leave me alot of ideas and people not being satisfyed and then I feel bad then yada yada and i just wana make somthing that I personality like. Thanks ALOT for the good comments - Sorry for the delay of post and keeping it updated guys. I got some parts of the cinematic done. Terraining: 65% Triggering: 15% Units:50% Models: N/A Over all: Possibaly 35% More of the story sometime tommarow night (EST) |
