The Well Of Eternity

It was a hot summers evening with the ember sun partially concealed behind the horizen when the well of eternity was discovered. Earlier in the day a scout from each race had found the well and returned to their homeland to spread the news about this enchanted well. Word eventually reached each ruler of the civilizations and each wanted the well for their race and their race only. Knowing that the well must have been seen by others by now each nation prepaired their troops and headed to the well prepaired to take it for themself despite their sacred allegiencies with another race. They all waited just in sight of the well for days watching for another race to attemp to control the well. After a moon of waiting they all charged the well. The battle ensued with no clear winner or loser in sight as they slaughtered eachother. After almost 2 days of constant battles all 4 nations were fatiuged and down to their strongest warriors and their leader. The heroes pulled up enough stregnth to fight in one last battle. They all stormed the well and drawing upon its ammence amount of power, released a wave of power destoying each and every unit left. They looked in fear at what they had done, not only to the enemy units, but to their own too. Each race's heroes looked eachothother in the eye and clashed, the only energy they had left was pouring from their very heart and soul with the passion to protect their nation. Eventually each one had fallen and the well was littered with the corpses of both hero and soilder. The leaders of these nations gazed ofer this horrific sight and decided to take matter into their own hands. They charged the well with all their might, each bearing an expression of pure anger and power. Although as they were charging the well a funny thing began to happen, each leader becan to slow in their step and when they finally reached eachother at the well the did not fight. They all looked at eachother and nodded then linked hands. As they completed the link the earth began to tremble and each leader could sence a negetive aura. They looked to the sky and saw a small red dot with a brownish center getting larger. Puzzled by this phenomenon they kept looking until one relized that it was a meteorite. Stuck groping for options, each one stumbled at the foot of the well. The meteorite struck the earch destroying not only the well, but the leaders too. This was a sign that the 4 nations must not be together and a worker from each nation saw this and brought the news back to their capitol cities. Each nation summoned their priests and a few batallions of troops to attempt to salvage whatever manpower they could from this battle.

Holy crap my eyes. I wont even read it cause my EYES hurt. Please use paragraphs and make it more...eye pleasing...please.

Orc Dork. maybe its a good idea to tell us the intention of this little summary.
Because if you want a opinion then one cant give it to you because one dos not know what it is.

Is it a story?
Then its crap, It has not characters and stuff. anyway as a story it would suck.

A outline of a story?
Then its very unoriginal. which would still enforce say its crap. remember the warcraft story/history isnt that good or original, try to find inpiration from either yourself or more original sources.

Game idea?
then its good i guess. aslong as you make it look good :P

Very little description...very little grammar (lack of paragraphs is major)....very little characters...
My summary to this story: very little. and thus not good at all.

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