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02-04-2006, 12:56 AM#1
ghenjis
A graveyard in a village
I want your comments, and thoughts, and harsh criticism.
Setting is Fall.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...s/Theyard1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...s/Theyard2.jpg

EDIT: fixed the floating obelisk at gate.
02-04-2006, 05:33 AM#2
RDX2
Nice One they look good.
02-04-2006, 06:33 AM#3
taplonaplo
work a bit more on takin the sss. the tree's trunk is too wide, you should scale it only on the z axis imo. The graveyard itself is fine. rep 4 ya
02-04-2006, 08:38 AM#4
PlasticAngel
I really like it, the sky doesn't fit in with the fog on the first shot. But very good terrain. Rep for you :P
02-04-2006, 09:22 AM#5
Naiden
maybe you can change the fog is too gray.But i love this graveyard keep it up!
and rep for u
02-04-2006, 12:00 PM#6
Gitlich
superb use of the river rushes model. people can say what they like about the trees, but i think they look good. although, id like to see some small trees in the more open areas. the patches of rock in the graveyard a bit odd as they look too flat to me, id prefer to see a little height variation on them, or possably some small rocks added. overall, very nice work
02-04-2006, 03:49 PM#7
ghenjis
I added rock to the rock tiles and cahnged the atmosphere, your thoughts?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...eYard1Edit.jpg
02-04-2006, 04:02 PM#8
Naiden
ROXXXXXXXXX MAN!
02-04-2006, 09:21 PM#9
PlasticAngel
Thats great, but could you attach your pics with your post from now on ghenj?
02-04-2006, 09:41 PM#10
Darkfox2002
hey try making the trees and the grass a bit smaller and it should look alot better.
02-04-2006, 11:56 PM#11
Hemlock
Ghenjis:
That second picture in your first post, you should use another angle, that angle just isn't quite that fitted for a good terrain view.

P.S the last link, is very nice, the night effect is well executed and I think you did a keen job on making it all night like. (green rep)
02-05-2006, 12:57 AM#12
KrewL RaiN
Love how you did that fence, and that last link is great with that moon. This be