Draenei LoreLord WIP

I shall call him, Mr. Squigly arms.
a WIP and i want to spit on my scanner cuz it hates me.

(ps. will fix arm.. dam..so many lightings..)

doesnt look that draenei to me.

were, all your drawings look like characters made from modeling clay/dogh, is that intentional or just a phase you're going through?

I'm tempted to agree with TDR... it all looks so soft...

Are you using pencils that aren't very sharp or something?

I agree with TDR and icbm, it looks like a clay figure.

You need to define the shape of it, the pose is good though although there are some proportions which just aren't right.
His left leg looks broken or at least bended, and the fingers on his left hand looks like they're covered in a carapace.

nice, but i think the shading seems too simplified, try using a sharper pencil to fill in some detail.

yeah. my style sucks and the scanner makes it look blurry.. i wont post the finished one since my scanner makes it look like a giant dark blob.

if its any comfort, i like this protossy-kinda take on the dranei. I like it verry much. Though the comments of the others still stand, i like the general look and feel.

*takes a step back* nice pose