| 03-04-2006, 04:24 PM | #1 |
meh, again trying to improve on drawing... Well I started practising out the link HatewarE gave me, so what do you think? |
| 03-04-2006, 04:45 PM | #2 |
The gallery is for finished pieces. Moved to concept art. |
| 03-04-2006, 05:39 PM | #3 |
You really ought to presketch before you try to add details to a face. Check out Andrew Loomis' books: http://www.fineart.sk/index.php?cat=1 These should give you an idea on how to pre-sketch and what the basic structures of the face are. Remember... it's better to go from broadly defined to detail... rather than going straight to detail. icbm1987 |
| 03-05-2006, 09:38 AM | #4 |
1. eyes aren't in the middle of the face 2. eyes are odd 3. either nose is too small or mouth is too near placed to the chin 4. the widht of the is wrong compared to the eyes (it should be about 5x the length of an eye in portrait look, and if it's more the 3/4 portrait and 1/4 profil look than there should be still more room from the one visible ear to the eye on the same side) The eyes are the worst mistkae you've made. Look again on the pages with the eye tutorial. Also I see that you obviously can't draw circles well. because many places where there has to ba a round shape there isn't. |