The Demonic Betrayal

"I have freed....myself"
"No, Grom, you have freed us all"

--Wakes up--

Thrall coughed loudly as if something was in his throat, it was just a dream.. Grom...he thought, he kept thinking about his old friend, and how he should of stayed with him in stead of casting him away to Ashenvale... but those times and chances where lost, as well as many other things. He got up to go to his throne as he does everyday, he looked for Doomhammer... there it was! It was growing bright with thunder, as he picked it up, it compressed slightly as if it was happy to see him. He put on his armour, still thinking about the dream. He did free us all, Thrall thought, that he did...my good friend Grom.
"Daily orders Warchief?" reported Nazgrel, chieftain of the raiders. "Uhh...remember Nazgrel! You where supposed to report to Kerr about the humans invasions on Durotaur"
"Yes Warchief!" Acknowledged Nazgrel, Thrall walked towards his throne, sniffing the morning cooking, that's what he loved about Orgrimmar, the market was so close he could taste the meat and bread. He stepped onto his throne, sat down and got ready for the announcements. "Vul'Jin, Nazgrel and Council, today we inspect the humans encroachment, we have had past quarrels with them and problems with invasions, but this one is specifically is problematic! We have reports from Tigris and Tregthar about certain humans invading Durotaur, not alive though, we have found their corpses everywhere, mages, warriors, everything! Today Nazgrel has ordered that Kerr and his brother seek out more humans and see if they can find anymore noticeable clues...if not, we shall investigate further towards outlying camps and even Stormwind itself if we have to! For the Horde!"
"Throm'kar Warchief! Kerr has reported that Tigris has investigated the Barrens and saw other numerous signs of human corpses, though one thing worries me Warchief, all the human corpses. Well they are all human! No Nightelves, no Dwarves and Orgrim be praised, no Gnomes..." Nazgrel looked to Vul'jin for further details, "Yeah mon, da Troll's and I have inspected something mon, all de humans got no marks on em, it be scary mon, looks like they died from somethin unworldly mon! Maybe we shou-"
Thrall cut in, "Alright, I know what is happening here, I have heard from the north that the Burning Legion has returned, with very powerful magic’s, enough to wipe out an entire army with a single word, no doubt the humans where planning an invasion on Orgrimmar, one thing bothers me though, why did none of us die of this massive strike? We shall investigate more tomorrow when our weapon caravan arrives."


"Surprised to see you here at this meeting Mannoroth, I thought you were still too weak to move after that stomach injury, our Demonic alters are a little rusty over wounds..."
"Watch it worm! Ill have your head if your not careful" Mannoroth had revived, as well as a lot of the Burning Legion champions, but they yet release their new weapon... The audience was wild, all the demons where chanting and talking in their ghostly voices and then Varimathias stepped up to the pulpit, "QUIET PATHETIC BEINGS!" everyone silenced, "Shut up or I shall eliminate you all! The council is being especially late today so I will do the talking, like I am going to tell you again, if i hear about any of you giving any clues as to me being here, I will kill you, if Sylvannus finds out she'l kill me and our plan will be ruined. We already know about the Orcs, she has told me that they know we are behind the attacks, I shouldn't have, they know now, but what was I supposed to do, let them kill the Orcs? It will ruin our plan! Anyway, we need the horde on our side, combined with our magics and their strength we could take over Azeroth as our own! Thrall will be our biggest obstacle, but threw our secret weapon, I think we may be able to controll them as our own... Peerrrfeccct...." The audience cheered "FOR THE BURNING LEGION!!"
"How will we get the two together Varimathias?" Asked Brethnor Valorscum, "I mean, the Horde already knows who the Burning Legion is!"
"It is apparent that the only part Brethnor has lost threw revival is his brain" The Legion laughed, "Me of course! The horde still suspects that I'm not fully on their side, but they don't doubt it, I will get Thrall... I will..." He laughed historically.

.......... Do you want to hear more... Who is this "Secret Weapon?" Then stay tooned, feedback would be lovely :)
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isn't anyone going to comment :(

Ha, falco, it's rather slow here in this forum. Not at all what you're used to in the Art forums I'm guessing :P
Anyways, it's alright, there were quite a few grammatical/spelling errors, although nothing too major, if you would like me to point them all out then I will.
The only one I will mention is the "threw" you used. That isn't the right one. Use "through" next time.
But anyways, a cool story, although it's kinda going against the flow of the RoC story..ha.
EDIT: By the way, you spoiled part of the surprise by saying "who is this secret weapon" instead of what heh.

Hey, not all Wc3 stories follow their historic perspective or the lore anyways, so who cares?

From was has happened, I can say, "Bye bye, Grom! We'll miss you!(not!)"

Yes, that's true. I didn't say it was bad cause that he did that though, it was just an interesting choice.

This is after WoW..like im playing WoW right now, so this is a little later...

hehe i know, not the best speller or gramma'ist, but...ya know :P

"Thrall."

"Thrall!"

"Thraallll!!!!"


And then he woke up, this time, to an outlandish place....no where near home, it felt cold and dry as if he had just drank an ocean and sat in the sun after...

"Thrall."

The fourth time pierced him, he looked, gazed around, he wasn't wearing anything, not even his own body, human. Why was he a human, so confused at this state, who was calling his name, did he fit his name?

"Thrall!"

5'th time, he knew who it was, it was he... Calling his own name, but why, was it even him?

"What are your hopes for your race great War Chief?

A misterious voice came from him, one he recognised... Medivh? Thrall looked everywhere, then stopped. "Do not move, stay. listen. watch. A figure came from the shadow, tall and thick, clad in a demonic presentation, then a second one.. It was his body, but not him... "Who--" Thrall started then got interupted by the Prophet "Watch."
The vision of him and this demonic being startled him, the fake Thrall moved forward and yelled a name "Hellscream! GROM!" Thrall had no Idea who he was, who was this Hellscream? But then just as he grasped it at the back of his mind, the other figure said something faint, "It is I, brother, I have come back..." A single tear fell from the visioned Thrall's eye, a tear of hope, glory and honor. "You are back? Grom!" The visioned Thrall shouted.
"It is I, Thrall, shall we talk?"

"Thrall."

"Thrall?"

Medivh spoke out Thrall's own etheral self, it fealt weird to be talking to himself, but not himself. "What do you want of your race, Thrall?" The question rose and died threw Thralls mind, "Ofcourse, to be free, live our lives seperate of War, and the corruption..." Thralls head suddenly turned towards the vision, and saw a dark blue shadow, then came from it a dark and twisted champion, one that looked as if he was from the Legion... It was him, Thrall, Warchief of the Horde...Thrall, Destroyer of the Horde... He turned away...

"Thrall."

"Hellscreem will come back, he is the Legions new weapon, it is your choice whether to trust him or not... Lead your people to their Doom, or Lead your people to their Destiny..." Medivh's voice trailed off...
"But how do I--"
"Your destiny Thrall, choose it..."

And then he awoke, inside where he normaly does, with Doomhamer to the left and his Warchief armour to the right... "Grom."



....Feedback is appreciated, tune in to see what desision Thrall makes... or if Medivh was right...

hey falco... i know you've already heard this but... your writing is very hard to understand. I think your writing for yourself more then for others, so that you get it but its hard for us as readers to understand whats happening. Really good ideas once i understand your story i think it will be very enjoyable. maybe edit it a little make it more understandable for the people that arent in your head:P ahah... any ways final comment: not to good of writing, excellent idea. Work on it though

lol he had to let everyone know...

Somehow...I'm pretty sure I saw that coming.
Anyways, the comment about your writing is right, it is hard to understand, just work on it.
Also, it's an ok turn of events, but it wasn't that surprising. Everyone else revives, why not Grom? I'm hoping your next part will take a more surprising turn of events.

oh it will......


....it will *evil laugh*