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03-22-2006, 07:30 AM#1
n00b11
just want some comments. did this when i dident have tha internet, so no custom doodads at all :)

03-22-2006, 09:48 AM#2
Hemlock
Looks quite good.

You might add a few smaller trees here and there, and fill up the terrain a tad more with something (be creative)

Try let the fog start earlier, and let it end on the same value as you got now or perhaps stretch it a bit more, just see what looks the best.
The way you did it looks like there is no fog at start and suddenly the fog gets dense (try to make it look a bit more realistic)

Last little thing I would advice, is to remove those green doodads you used in the start of your screenshot, if you use the rather dull (autumn like) riverrushes try to keep yourselves to the element;) , or you should blend in the green doodads a bit more over the whole screenshot.

I like the bridge :D.

all in all good, but some updates would make this even better.
03-22-2006, 10:06 AM#3
n00b11
thnx for the feedback, but there isent really much doodads for autumn in wc3 and those shrubs should really go away or maybe shrink them and make them all over the map, and the fog :$ it was meant to be 300-5000 but i got 3000-5000 :( and i will put up and update l8 when i get my new comp i will put up some more pics, this comp isent that good really i get to heavy lagg :(
03-22-2006, 10:22 AM#4
Hemlock
Looking forward to your next screens :)
03-22-2006, 06:35 PM#5
ghenjis
The river is too small to even have a bridge, from as far as I can see, it looks like spomeone can simply step over the river. You can also use more variation with your river rush tinting. And more tile variation, it's all dirt pretty much. Though it's not bad, just needs some minor edits.
03-22-2006, 10:20 PM#6
HernanG
looks really good, without custom,

i suggest paint some grass tile around the shrubs, also put smaller shrubs and tiny rocks, anyway, good job, i like the fog.
03-23-2006, 05:57 AM#7
Hyarion
VERY nice. Not "whoa, stunning", but a VERY solid piece of terrain.
+Rep!
03-23-2006, 07:17 AM#8
n00b11
well ghenjis i dont think a roality woud like to step right in to the mud every time he goes away from the castle ? ^^ and thnx for feedback all :) i am going to edit all things as soon as i get my new comp >.< this 1 laggs to much so maybe in 1 week i will put upp some pics ;)
03-23-2006, 07:41 AM#9
PlasticAngel
The river does look horrible, make it bigger. Trees are scaled far too big, try downloading some custom doodads. It doesn't lagg because of the fog it's because of the horrible river rushes spammed everywhere. Remove most of them and try adding other doodads, possibly tinted shrubs or customs. And you have no tile varyation which looks horrible. But the picture isn't all bad, it has a nice atmosphere.
03-23-2006, 08:03 AM#10
n00b11
man u all hate my river >.< ok i changed it, it isent a river anymore.. it is a stream now.. and i am going to take away 50% of the river rushes , make trees smaller and put in some custom doodads, and i never said it lagg because of the fog :p and i dident want to us tile variation cause i think lordareon fall tiles really sucks.. and i am of for WEU bye
03-23-2006, 08:30 AM#11
PlasticAngel
You can use a custom tileset...
03-23-2006, 08:57 AM#12
n00b11
Here is some updated pics 1 of the hills.



The bridge



so now i am looking for new feedback, and i am going to make this map playable!
03-23-2006, 10:00 AM#13
PlasticAngel
Click the link in my signature for tutorials.
03-23-2006, 07:26 PM#14
n00b11
ehm i am not a nub.. what ever u think i am.. and btw i dident rally say this terrain is 100% done, and plastic u know what the word NOOB means?
03-23-2006, 08:01 PM#15
Blade.dk
Yes, newbie meant in a negative way.

I believe Plastic's signature is mostly for fun, don't take it as an offence.