A random Silkirar

hoping is not as bad as others before

Aside from the obvious anatomical issues, the face has a nice heroic experssion, though his armor is massive and yes, very bad anatomy, also the shading isn't done well

The sword is cool.

your hatching is realy chaotical. there should be nice 45 degrees strokes.

its scratching, not hatching.

actualy it's hatching

what he does, is scratching, not hatching.

oh, that's what you meant :P. yeah, I agree with you.

Also loos like he smudged some parts...

smudging with the finger or better with a paper blender is good in some cases, like when drawing with charcoal or pastels, but in this case it's kinda nasty, yeah.