Teh Shit!

Bah Pig Doctor person.

I think it's awesome so far.

Except the legs are a bit wonky... but there are ways to cover that up when you shade/color. :P

Good work.

icbm1987

See, the thing is, I dont have the attention span to color.
Also I suck at teh colorz.
Im gonna need a very very very hefty tutorial.

and on a completely different tangent.
I need criticism on my storyboard. Its only like one chapter, and its poorly drawn but it puts out the plot quickly.
Self-Explanatory... sorta.

i'm sorry to day this shadow, but i just cant follow whats going on there :(

yeah, you lost me.

me too...



Wait! I found myself again...

Ermm...


1) THere is a town. In it are 2 guys.
2) Guy 1 = "I would very much like to be made aware of our financial situation!"
3) Guy 2 = "Our gold mine has collapsed"
4) Guy 2 = "So instead let us smuggle ourself aboard an idling train!"
5) And so they did.
6) Guys Together = "A WINNER IS US!"
7) OMFG!!!!1 A HAXOR HAS FUCKING HAXED THE TRAIN!!>!
8) Girl = "Save me!" "Save me!" "Save me!" BANG *GARK*.
9) Hijackzor = "HAHA I AM REALLY SPEHIROTH! LETS FIGHT"
10) *arrive in town*
11) Pig Doctor = "oink"
12) A WINNER IS YOU! TOO CHAPTER TEW!!!!1

Brilliant...

You... SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE MY STORIES.