| 05-05-2006, 02:06 AM | #1 |
I suck at smooth lineart with tablet. Indulge me (the head). |
| 05-05-2006, 12:20 PM | #2 |
Ahhh... Very nice, I really do like those colors. My only critique at the moment is her crotch, why is there such a huge gap? And I've got some suggestions for the colors. Try using some yellow as well as a toned down violet color. To give it some more variation. |
| 05-05-2006, 01:42 PM | #3 |
The gun is.. green :) |
| 05-05-2006, 02:54 PM | #4 |
Dude... the arms look kind of funky... and she seems to have fat wrists. It also looks like you just decided to pansy out on her lower body... from what I can see... her crotch doesn't line up with where it should be... I hate to be the one to say it... but your last piece was much better... and the main flaws I'm seeing in this one have to do with anatomy, which I KNOW you are good at. aesthetically... It'd make a nice album cover. icbm1987 |
| 05-05-2006, 07:57 PM | #5 |
Trav - Dunno y. I'll try that violet and yellow thing in my next drawing. I hope I remember. White - Yeah I know. icbm - Now that I look at it. Yea her wrist (mostly the one holding the elbow) is fat. The crotch should be fine but a bit tight. I think what makes last piece seem better is that I sketched it with pencils and then did the colour things on computah. I think digital linearts are not so much my thing. :/ But yeah I liked teh overall graphic effect. |