A spiky and thorny thing

OK, that's my first attempt of doing something out of the cartoon/comic style. It's some kind of a spiked/horned beast. I wasn't very happy with the head, so I deciced to put it here and see what am I doing wrong. I understand there isn't much to comment, but better see my mistakes early.

P.S. Sorry for the crappy picture, but I did it on the shittiest piece of paper I found, with a 10 cent ball-point pen and then took the shot with my webcam.

10-cent ballpoint pens own.

anyway, all i can really say at this point is define your shapes better, scetch before laying down hard lines. Also, a 3/4 vieuw is usually a lot more interesting thenn a front or side vieuw when drawing such things.

Well it turned out to be a giant mutated sewer rat. It lives here.
An one minute pencil scetch of how should it look like:

I know the 3/4 view looks better, but as I said - it's my first try, so the side view should do for now. Maybe the final version will be in an isometric perspective.

damn your terraining looks good.

yep, pretty good (the terraining). the drawing I don't like.

I just enjoy the terrain. But the drawing isn't that nice. Still okay.

Nah, I just realized that I need more practice before I can come out with someting decent. Thanks however for the compliments about the terrain. I think I'll continue doing comics until I get good enough for something serious. Here's my latest one. His name is Misha the Bear. lol

i is too low on the details. Also he is missing its feet, and hos teeth are strange. But funny drawing.

nice clean lines

Bounty. Eww. It's a comic.
I like the dog thought.