Dragon

This is an Dragon I made in school today. I was bored, well nothing much.

anyone?

well... whats there to say? its a dragon chocking itself? :(

He's choking himself, don't you see the hand :P ?

It was showing my emotinal status while in school

but is it good or bad?

Edit My Dragon is here - just thickened the lines

well its uh...*cough* interesting? anyway...try to make the lines cleaner and less uhhh... *choppy*. as for the coloring its all flat..add some shading for depth

please stop double posting. it's clear that you don't have tallent, so keep practicing.

hey, thats not nice tdr..
i like it.. lines r abit choppy. but not to be mean..but did you trace this? hes arm and wing joinings are a common factor to show it has been traced.

what did I say wrong?? There are 2 kinds of people: those who have tallent and make things good with not much effort and those who are not tallented and have to work hard to achieve a high performance. So what's so bad if I told him he hasn't got tallent? He just has to practice a lot.

nothing bad in it TDR, thx Warewulf but since my English is bad, I don't know the meaning of "Trace" so could you please explain it? Thanks.

Why is there holes in the wings? And what a weird horn =P

The stance is ok you just need to work more on body proportions and perspective.

The holes are eyes, but they look bad,I need to to do them better. I will make ir better today and post it again.

to trace is the thing when you place your drawing instrument on a surface and draw a line. to draw a line = to trace a line.

trace
n.
1. A visible mark, such as a footprint, made or left by the passage of a person, animal, or thing.
2. Evidence or an indication of the former presence or existence of something; a vestige.
2. A barely perceivable indication; a touch: spoke with a trace of sarcasm.
3.
1. An extremely small amount.
2. A constituent, such as a chemical compound or element, present in quantities less than a standard limit.
4. A path or trail that has been beaten out by the passage of animals or people.
5. A way or route followed.
6. A line drawn by a recording instrument, such as a cardiograph.
7. Mathematics.
1. The point at which a line, or the curve in which a surface, intersects a coordinate plane.
2. The sum of the elements of the principal diagonal of a matrix.
8. An engram.

then if I understood good this hasn't been traced.