When more then 80% of a screenshot is sky and water somthing is wrong. Oh and black fog is lame on s sunny day. Add some weather and change the angle. Crop properly too please.
Fogs still black, still doesn't have any weather. I suggest light blue fog and patches of sunlight. Also it's very flat, has little tile varyation and could be filled up with alot more doodads.
Make the end of the map not visible, Make the ground less flat after the shore. You need more doodads for the town. And there's too many people for the amount of houses.