| 05-29-2006, 07:18 PM | #2 |
Please read our Rules, images should be attached not linked to ImageShack. Also images larger than the style width of this site must be within [thumbnail] tags. Please do not make a thread title all in capitals, I have modified this for you. Lastly, take a look at the header of the forum. See the 'Tutorials' button? Might have tried there first. Moved. |
| 05-29-2006, 07:40 PM | #3 |
The grassy dirt is very ugly; it doesn't fit in with the rest of the tileset. Also, you didn't mention Rough Dirt, and yet, your terrain contains it. For suggestions, you could fix the perspectives on the doodads and give some perspective tips. However, this is a good tutorial for beginners, so I'll approve it. EDIT: Also, crop your pictures, get rid of the World Editor. |
| 05-29-2006, 07:40 PM | #4 |
Also, your images are huge (1.4MB each). Please save them as JPEG instead of BMP and decrease the quality. |
| 05-29-2006, 07:47 PM | #5 |
OK, well I did say at the beggining that I am noob to this site and writing tutorials, but I wont get angry, lol. If I attatch images I wont be able to display them in the relevant section of the tutorial though, or will I? Guess I'll have to attatch em anyway. PS I only included the grassy dirt cos I thought it looked kind of like mouldy hay O_o Guess not though... |
| 05-29-2006, 07:52 PM | #6 |
[attach]####[/attach] will let you place the attachment where you want in the thread. (The #### appear in the URL to the attachment, somthing like attachmentid=####) Or if you can't figure that out, just do [thumbnail] with the link to the attachment. |
| 05-29-2006, 08:31 PM | #7 |
OK I changed them to thumbnails, is it OK now? I aslo added in the fact that I used rough dirt (I purely forgot about it before because it's on the original tileset) and changed a few typos etc. |
| 05-29-2006, 11:52 PM | #8 |
Well, I don't know where you uploaded the images as attachments, but the links are broken. To attach the images to your post, edit it, click on go advanced, manage attachments, and select the images you want to attach from your harddisk. As already mentioned they should be jpg or gif, not uncompressed bmps. When the images finally work this can be approved. |
| 05-30-2006, 05:21 PM | #9 |
lol OK I fixed the images again |
| 05-31-2006, 05:16 PM | #10 |
Ok, that's cool now, approved! |
| 06-01-2006, 06:42 AM | #11 |
This tut's not so bad. Though the city looks pretty ugly to my liking. Too much everything in a too small area. Buildings and their placement looks like random village cottages yet the streets are cobbled and symmetrical like in bigger cities. Also if this is "city" why does it have dirt and rocks all over it when streets are cobbled? I think that if people have the knowledge of cobbling roads they would most definetely pay attention to foundations of the buildings. Still, I think this tut works. I just disagree with some issues here :) |
| 06-01-2006, 12:08 PM | #12 |
Eh, he hasn't even changed the fog from it's default, the whole thing is flat and pretty ugly imo. Anyone could make this in a few minutes. I'm working on a city tutorial that is going to be really long, (suspence) so be on the look out. As for the tutorial writer you should really take a look at the terrain capabilitys of our members here because 95% of them are better then you, and somehow you writing tutorials for them seems rather wrong. But it's still a good start, but you have lots to learn. |
| 06-01-2006, 02:16 PM | #13 |
lol, well sorry for offending you so badly... I did say that it was my first tutorial, but still I think 95% may be an exageration O_o I think you may be basing that off the minority of regular WT entrants... |
| 06-01-2006, 07:02 PM | #15 |
ROFL I GIVE UP, i just won't bother posting any more tutorials, I just get flamed, and told it looks 'ugly', or 'mine is better' or 'you do it like this...' If anyone does actually find it useful (which I sincerely doubt now) please do let me know :D |
