Dwarf Ranger

Meh. For camel humper.

The hands look too large and out of proportion, and I don't like the left foot's position. But a cool picture nonetheless.

Dwarfs have big hands.

And ive messed up on the bow and feet, im lazy.

His head looks a bit strange.
Also, his arms are too thin if you look to his Body.

Note: 3/5

The feet are wrong in perspective O.o

How so, stand like your shooting an arrow.

When pulling back a bowstring... your fingers are not unbent...

It's usually the index and middlefinger that touch the bowstring and arrow, no other part of the hand.

Otherwise, good work.

icbm1987

Thats how ive pulled an arrow, all fingers outward, and index and thumb gripping the arrow.

nice I like it... since it was for camels then I hoe I don't end modeling it xD

good job

The knuckles on his right hand look funny to me...

YOUR DWARF HEADS ARE TOOO BIG!!!!

Feet not big enough. Arm too long. The pose gives the feel as if he's aiming but he's not cuz of the way he holds the bow.

I think what Hateware was pointing at is that the right feet is in a downward perspective while the other leg and body is in a profile perspective (ionno if thats the term... blah).

Well... that's alot more awkward and harder to position right than gripping between index and middle finger.

It also looks kinda wrong.

some probs already mention but i like your lineart and style.
keep it up!

dude, thats not how you shoot a bow...



http://images.google.nl/images?q=archer&hl=nl

check out the images. See how the right arm pulling the bow string is in a straight line with the arrow? Also notice, how the hand is held on or near the cheek so that you can actually aim your shot.