| 06-27-2006, 04:33 AM | #2 |
hahahahaha! i like it. her hips seem abit small and head abit big, but good job |
| 06-27-2006, 07:40 AM | #3 |
hi hi... been a while, but i'll give it some critique... Love the use of texture and color. The rather monochromatic yellows really pop with the vivid blood splatter effects. Great facial expression. Has the "I got jacked up" look, with a hint of downs syndrome(in a good way of course). The breasts are rather .... gravity defying... which leads me to believe that shes been thrown off a building and landed on pavement... maybe???? iono.. but i like... i like.. Odd belly button. It seems like a rather long slit. intended? sure why not! love the slight fade to black at the top. The blood splatter really pulls the piece together, even though theres something about the blood that doesnt really go with the figure. The blood is very coarse and abrupt, and the figure isnt. maybe try to be mroe agressivie with your painting style?? iono.. just tossing crap out there. been a while since ive critiqued anything. o.O. Still mucho bieno. |
| 06-27-2006, 09:42 AM | #4 |
The belly area seems to be rather stretched and extended too, making her look rather malformed and giving the entire image the sort of "stretched upwards" look. |
| 06-27-2006, 10:28 AM | #5 |
The croch area is too flat, being the pervert that i am, i like to see some depth in that area. |
| 06-27-2006, 02:59 PM | #6 |
Werewulf - Yea noticed that. :D FUNG - Thanks, the belly button seems weird since I duplicated the lineart twice with varying contrast levels to get that textured bg. The fade black was because of the scanner since I used oversized paper. Now all my pics have that sort of trademark fade lol. Yea the painting style isn't appropriate, I jst slapped some colors pretty quick. When I get my new comp I'll try some stuff cuz my comp is too slw and its real frustrating to see what the brushes do 30sec after. Gracias! Pheonix - Yea duplicated lineart layer, I'll try to fix that. Ewrt - How could I give more volume to that? I couldn't find good leather underwear lighting refs with my parents around. :/ Sry 4 double post, I updated the pic in the first post. Added and fixed blood. Made her thighs a bit larger. Fixed belly button and changed a bit the lips. Also added her background story. The names are just random. |
| 06-27-2006, 08:59 PM | #7 |
dont double post, edit ffs.\ Croch still doesnt turn me on. |
| 06-27-2006, 10:27 PM | #8 |
Yea that's why I asked you how to make it sexy. |
| 06-28-2006, 04:19 AM | #9 |
Erwt makes anything sexy. I dunno, Candy Warlock is one of those names that noone reallly cares to think deeply about. Its just there, and it fits. Everyone will still call you Candy Warlock. You've been that way for years, and no way in hell does it sound childish, if it were Pink Unicorn yeah... Something about the sleeve on her left arm bothers me. Maybe it isnt kinda falling or being tugged by gravity or something. |
| 07-07-2006, 02:53 PM | #10 |
Correct to the cm proportion is really not much of a matter imo. As long as it looks good, it really doesn't matter unless you're a tech illustrator. Take a look at Tae-Kim's art for War of Genesis. NOT ONE SINGLE PIC is to proportion. But they look fantastic nonetheless. I really like the colour contrast for this pic. And I think the body look good as is. The long slender build fits the atmosphere nicely. Great work. |
| 07-09-2006, 04:12 PM | #11 |
SS- I wont change my username here just for DA. Xmet- Yea HTK ownz proportions. Thx for the comment. |
