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Lady Metaphor

06-27-2006, 04:18 AM#1
Candy_Warlock
First finished picture of the summer. Might be last I do on this crappy computer, I'll be getting a new computer eventually (and try out WoW for 10 days rofl, get the latest Painter, make high def canvas on PS without running out of space, be able to micro in DOTA!)

Also, I'm changing DeviantArt accounts for those who care, I'll be using artofminh.deviantart.com soon. CandyWarlock jst sounds so childish... I wanted Minh but it was taken... grr. Minh is my middle name if ya wondering. :)

Arrighty so the pic, done all in one day so its a bit rushed but hell! I'm kinda happy with it. It's not what I had in mind really but its still cool in my opinion. The girl is Lady Metaphor (which is a character name idea i had for my captain obvious comic which died out). This picture has nothing to do with Capt.Obvious its more or less a creation for my captivation for sexy women and dangerous objects. The initial idea emphasized on the scalpel and her face and subtle mutilation (oh my gawd ) anyways I unconsciously toned it down (sanity). Lawl, so here it is. I hope I'll draw her more.

Yea, always wanted to make a fur wearing character. Fur was fun to do. I think I pulled that off but her panties I missed, its supposed to be leather.

NEW VERSION:


OLD VERSION:


Story of Lady Metaphor

Hidden information:


Born in the countryside of Hantigue, Katherine de Boulognes was the youngest child of her family. Sadly, her parents died in a car accident when she was six and Katherine was put in an orphanage in the city of Frusburg. Katherine had two older brothers and a sister. When she entered the orphanage of Frusburg, she was separated from her brothers and was left only with her older sister, Amelia. Her sister, being in her late teenage years, had to do chores around the orphanage and couldn’t take care of Katherine. Katherine became anti-social and concentrated all her efforts in school and didn’t mingle with the other orphans. She proved to be a very promising student but with a weird personality. Amelia slowly sank into depression. Her physical and mental state deteriorated incredibly. Katherine thought her sister was exhausted because of the chores but found her sister crying and yelling of pain at night. Years passed and the sisters continued to survive together. Katherine couldn’t find what was hurting her sister during all those years...

One day, Katherine walked in on her sister having sex with the orphanage director. Katherine never knew his name, he was known as the Director. Katherine was now thirteen; her sister had left the orphanage and worked in a bakery. Apparently that wasn’t enough to pay for Katherine’s tuition at the orphanage. Amelia, having lost touch with reality, killed herself later that night out of humiliation and insanity.

After that incident, Katherine was deeply hurt. She had lost all reason to live. She thought of hanging herself in the dormitory when all the orphans were playing outside. At that moment, the Director intervened. He took her to his office and raped her. He told her she was the reason her sister died and that if she killed herself that would be an insult to all of her sister’s life. Even though she despised the Director, she knew he was right. The Director continued to have sexual relations with Katherine for a year until one day he compared her beauty to Amelia’s. Katherine then realized that the director had raped her older sister at several occasion in the past and that he was the source of her sister’s pain.

Strangely enough, Katherine managed to maintain her high grades even when she led such a twisted life. She dreamt and hoped naively for a better life. She poured her heart into poetry and soon became obsessed with it. She eventually came to the conclusion that life was all but a dream or a nightmare. She then killed the Director when he was having sex with her and left the orphanage. She left Frusburg with the money she stole from the orphanage and roamed the cities of Hantigue in search for a dream and a purpose. In the big city of Porso Knev, she settled down as an assassin for the various warring factions that battled for monopoly over the city’s black market. Katherine had killed a lot during her years of voyage in Hantigue and was now skilled with short blades. She killed for the excitement, the deception, the hunt. She then joined a group of mercenary assassins shortly after settling in Porso Knev and became a great asset to the group. She was now known as Lady Metaphor after vowing to never really mean anything, to never really feel anything but to only enjoy this pitiful dream until the day she will be forced to wake up.
06-27-2006, 04:33 AM#2
Werewulf
hahahahaha!

i like it.

her hips seem abit small and head abit big, but good job
06-27-2006, 07:40 AM#3
FatUglyNakedGuy
hi hi... been a while, but i'll give it some critique...

Love the use of texture and color. The rather monochromatic yellows really pop with the vivid blood splatter effects.

Great facial expression. Has the "I got jacked up" look, with a hint of downs syndrome(in a good way of course).

The breasts are rather .... gravity defying... which leads me to believe that shes been thrown off a building and landed on pavement... maybe???? iono.. but i like... i like..

Odd belly button. It seems like a rather long slit. intended? sure why not!

love the slight fade to black at the top.

The blood splatter really pulls the piece together, even though theres something about the blood that doesnt really go with the figure. The blood is very coarse and abrupt, and the figure isnt. maybe try to be mroe agressivie with your painting style??

iono.. just tossing crap out there. been a while since ive critiqued anything. o.O. Still mucho bieno.
06-27-2006, 09:42 AM#4
Pheonix-IV
The belly area seems to be rather stretched and extended too, making her look rather malformed and giving the entire image the sort of "stretched upwards" look.
06-27-2006, 10:28 AM#5
erwtenpeller
The croch area is too flat, being the pervert that i am, i like to see some depth in that area.
06-27-2006, 02:59 PM#6
Candy_Warlock
Werewulf - Yea noticed that. :D

FUNG - Thanks, the belly button seems weird since I duplicated the lineart twice with varying contrast levels to get that textured bg. The fade black was because of the scanner since I used oversized paper. Now all my pics have that sort of trademark fade lol. Yea the painting style isn't appropriate, I jst slapped some colors pretty quick. When I get my new comp I'll try some stuff cuz my comp is too slw and its real frustrating to see what the brushes do 30sec after. Gracias!

Pheonix - Yea duplicated lineart layer, I'll try to fix that.

Ewrt - How could I give more volume to that? I couldn't find good leather underwear lighting refs with my parents around. :/

Sry 4 double post, I updated the pic in the first post. Added and fixed blood. Made her thighs a bit larger. Fixed belly button and changed a bit the lips.

Also added her background story. The names are just random.
06-27-2006, 08:59 PM#7
erwtenpeller
dont double post, edit ffs.\

Croch still doesnt turn me on.
06-27-2006, 10:27 PM#8
Candy_Warlock
Yea that's why I asked you how to make it sexy.
06-28-2006, 04:19 AM#9
Shadow_Strike
Erwt makes anything sexy.

I dunno, Candy Warlock is one of those names that noone reallly cares to think deeply about. Its just there, and it fits. Everyone will still call you Candy Warlock. You've been that way for years, and no way in hell does it sound childish, if it were Pink Unicorn yeah...

Something about the sleeve on her left arm bothers me. Maybe it isnt kinda falling or being tugged by gravity or something.
07-07-2006, 02:53 PM#10
Xmetallium
Correct to the cm proportion is really not much of a matter imo. As long as it looks good, it really doesn't matter unless you're a tech illustrator. Take a look at Tae-Kim's art for War of Genesis. NOT ONE SINGLE PIC is to proportion. But they look fantastic nonetheless.

I really like the colour contrast for this pic. And I think the body look good as is. The long slender build fits the atmosphere nicely. Great work.
07-09-2006, 04:12 PM#11
Candy_Warlock
SS- I wont change my username here just for DA.

Xmet- Yea HTK ownz proportions. Thx for the comment.