A warcrafty novel (unfinished)

Well, here's something I wrote a few years back. It had a decent storyline and the people who read it liked it. Too bad I never finished it, but maybe it's better off that way.

~General
The story follows 3 main characters with very differing mindsets, which makes for a more dynamic read. The first character is a human paladin who finds himself in the company of a night elf demon hunter (with a hard to pronounce name, or so people tell me) who tends to freak him out. The second warrior is a young, brash orc who sees the darker side of humans early on. The third character is a twisted, aspiring necromancer in the Lich King's army. He's evil, coniving and general a fun guy
The story itself is relatively fast paced, and easy to follow. I also doubt it fits in with the warcraft storyline perfectly, but I don't really care for that much.
The thing it lacks most is probably descriptions of the main characters, but, as I said, I wrote it a while back and I guess I didn't want them in at the time. Still, this may give more freedom for those who like to visualize things their own way.
Oh well, it's still an ok read, so for those of you with a little spare time (it's only 26 pages, small font thou), I hope you enjoy it! Crits and comments welcome and incouraged

Okay, I'll read as soon as I can. I can't right now; It's late and I have school registration tomorrow in the morning. X_X

K then, will wait patiently for your comments Oh, and good luck with the school thing

Sorry, Mezzer. There were a lot of unexpected things that happened from Wednesday to today. Thursday was school shopping, and then on Friday my computer got reformatted, thus holding the reading 'til Sunday. And then when I was finally going to read it when there was last minute babysitting.

Oh well.

Anyways, it was WAY better then I thought. However, when I got the 26th page I was like, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!"

Damn... I wanted to see Kahastar burn in hell(he's a very messed up person).

You stopped at a- was what going to be a very good part. I want you to write more- if not finish the story, but that's entirely up to you.

I high reccomend that more people read Mezzer's 26 page story. It sounds long, but I wanted to keep reading, until I saw that the pages wouldn't scroll down anymore.

By the way, Mezzer, I think you turned off a lot of readers when you said 26 pages of "small font".

Overall, very nice story. I will keep it as one of my personal files(or not)!

Wow Mezzer, this was a good story, I enjoyed it. A bit vauge on the characters, but no problem. Very good, I wish this was done. I hit page 26 and slammed my fists on my desk in rage becuase the story was ended... Make more, please, this story is awesome!

Wow, I didn't expect you guys would like it that much The best part of the story is probably it's ability to captivate people, so yeah, the fact it was never finished is kinda crapy. Well, you know, I might just finish it these days since I have some free time for that kinda thing. So thanks for the comments again!

Well anyway, I recommend to anyone that has some free time to give it a read, since it's not that long and it's far from boring (I've been told anyway ).

Hmm Mezzer, I think your story went way too...

Hidden information: ...too good!!! Yeah it went way too good. Hiding this from you, in order to make you a little shocked ^^ You should go writing books. The following may look a little bad, but remember, it was just meant to shock you ^^ It was good indeed.

The only point I did not understand bery clearly was - everything about that Kaha*whatever*. But sadly it seemed to be the main element of you story.

Something needing improvement maybe: the paladin seems like quite experienced for war, but apparently not for the loss of war. He seems to have never lost his army ;-) just my opinion.

And you pretty have some writing habits, like "or what's left of it/them", ""... They are, at least, fun for me ;-)

And... the only thing that made me a little surprised is that the Mage Jacklain referred to a king Detheric, which was VERY similar to the dreadlord Detheroc, making me think that Jacklain serves the undead for a second ^^

Well thanks for the shock!
The characters do have their own little personality quirks that I tried to incorporate, such as the paladin never experiencing any real loss.
The story with Kahastar is simple really, though the actual events might be a little confusing, so to elaborate (without spoiling it for some people)

Hidden information: Kahastar took over control of his master Lestrix, with the aid of his banshee and is working under the guidance of the lich king, and his own maniacal plans.

Oh, and those writing habbits tend to make the story more consistent, and I'm quite prone to them
And I have no idea who Detheroc is, so no need to worry there
Now I've got even more reason to finish it