random Comic page - school boredom

yeah this is a comic page i drew during the lessons, it has no context or anything, could call it practice... not great, but i like it .... actually its low detailed, because the page i drewed on was only 11cm x 14cm... here's it...

page 1:

page 2:


its all traditional art, real ink and crayons...

Very nice, I like your cartoony crisp style.

However, make people crtoony too. And why horse has no neck? And if the knight is riding out shouldn't his cape be wind blown?

thx,
about the horse, i've never drawn one before, and it happend in school, so i had no reference, but i'll leave it like this.
about the cape, guess you're right, but realize that the horse is smaller than 1inch X 1inch so its hard to get detailed.

BUT right now i'm workin on a second page, nd tried to work on the points you mentioned...

Already Inked 3 Panels of page 2 and because i'm very lazy it could be done on friday... so check back later, and MORE COMMENTS WOULD BE COOL!

I like your angles.

So yeah... hurried up, cause i got motivated again... posted the new page in the 1st post under page 1