| 09-11-2006, 03:03 PM | #1 |
he has some serious eye problems. |
| 09-11-2006, 05:12 PM | #2 |
Left hand and both arms need to be fixed. Just my opinion ... looking unnatural. |
| 09-11-2006, 05:41 PM | #3 |
ye the arms are a bit short, but position is correct as he is swinging a heavy object -.- |
| 09-12-2006, 05:53 AM | #4 |
hrmm...not bad...the hands are to stiff. and the arm probs already been said. but dont use filters.. ever! |
| 09-12-2006, 11:02 AM | #5 |
it's realy hard for me to hold myself not to say something harsh and agressive about this piece....must hold myself.... so....all I can say is that you should draw still lifes and study objects (the main shape first, then step to the volume - shading -, and last the material). I don't care if you draw just for "fun" and you don't want a career in this, but that's what you should do. |
| 09-12-2006, 11:10 AM | #6 | |
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but dont let yourself get influenced and become a fool by TDRs advice and still life influences. ![]() |
| 09-12-2006, 11:46 AM | #7 |
you are a fool if you don't draw still lifes, you will improve very slow if you don't do that, trust me. |
| 09-12-2006, 11:49 AM | #8 |
who me?!?! no.. i did still life today..but im too lazy to scan.. still life is good..but i dont like it much since i cant make it really unique..or ..wat ever.. |
| 09-12-2006, 11:49 AM | #9 |
its ok, bring on the harsh critisism so i know whats wrong :) anyway, im reading some tutorials atm, trying to get atleast a little better -.- and i guess your all sick of my posts of crap pics (as im sure most of you think they are) so ill stop uploading untill i have something better. Otherwise TDR might suffer a serious heartattack while getting frustrated by my crap :) (no offence) |
| 09-12-2006, 11:51 AM | #10 |
none taken. werewulf, you can compose your still life in whatever way you want, you can make it unique. you can place it on the ceiling if you want. |
| 09-12-2006, 11:53 AM | #11 |
@sluggen: yes. @TDR: blarrr! :D |
