Mausoleum of Genocidal Holocaust

Mausoleum of Genocidal Holocaust

Corpses of thousands gathered at my feet.
Every human I kill is a day more with the gods.

Wielding a weapon of war and runes of protection,
Bloodshed and carnage have become my obsession.

Sky shines red upon a new dawn,
Rain purifies me from human blood,
Winds howl to my glory,
Thunder sings for my victory,

Burning the creations of evolutionary overgrowth,
Forging the Mausoleum of Genocidal Holocaust.

I like it moderatly. While it is pretty energetic, it also seems to be too fast (dont ask i just fell that way)

Well I didn't like it very much. The poem wasn't very descriptive, and it more or less jumped between ideas.

Yes it is fast, thats how I feel about it as well.

It's not an actual poem, its just err.. imaginary thoughts. This leaves quite much space for the reader. Maybe the symbolism has to be found out first in it, then you can think deeper. Even tho there ain't much of it.