My little first cinematic

This will be the intro to my map "Secret of ___ Island", but, this is my first cinematic, so... it obviously has bugs. I dont know too much about cinematics or camera movement, so suggestions, advises, how to make it better, etc.. are very appreciated :).

Also take a look at the camera system for the map: when the intro finnishes, select the dwarf hero, and move it along the shore. Then u will see the rest.

.) Here it is, inside a pirate ship...

Te' Campaign!

I can't seem to download this file, whenever I put in the 3number of the image in the form, it just redirect me to a page where I can upload files.

Yeah. I HATE DLing stuff from rapidshare. Why don't you upload it as an attachment?

Because it is 10mbs, just try again I got same prob but it worked eventually, make sure the code u put in is right

it has custom music :(

Ups, forgot, maybe it has grammar and spelling mistakes, i wrote quickly the dialogues.

@King_Klear: I tried, but it seems the file is too big.

@Warnicro: I just tried myself, and it worked.. O_0.

Yay I watched it, I thought it was a pretty cool intro accually ^_^. Some of the cameras could of been better, but nothing horrible. I only saw the inside terrain in the movie which had abunch of guys clipping through chairs which was kinda weird, but it was good and so is most of your other terrain that wasnt shown but that wasnt a suprise:P

Didnt really understand the random death animations, and during the scene with the little kid it looked like the floor had water on it, dunno if that was intentional. Other than that its a start, I look forward to completion. BTW you shouldnt of had music in the map that you don't even use and yes there was grammar errors.

xD thx for watching it:

well the death animation... that guy is suppose to be "drunk", i forgot to put that trigger in the map i uploaded. The floor with water is a "rushing terrain" mistake, that room isnt terrained :p. The music is for the map (it isnt only that cinematic, its a playable map) Anyway, i will those things u mentioned :)

Ah ok my mistake, oh and your camera system seemed pretty cool, good luck with the rest of the map.

I cant watch it either since I've "used" all my DL credits there... mirror?

Wait, im improving it, i'll post a link in a few minutes ;)

I cant go on to the next segment of the cinematic i need help

HELP PLEASE! i get to the end past the peasent and
then i cant go anywhere. please help me and the musicdid you getit from monkey island? sorry for double post

Take the way to the north, it takes u to the jungle.

And try to not double post, otherwise, someone will neg rep u.

If you know it's wrong, why do you do it? Just edit your post.
Anyway, I'll wait for the improved version before I view this.

10 mb... I'll try it when I'll get Dsl.