(7) 24 o'clocks Midnight:Suffering FpX-ENG ver.

I use one days time to translate this map in English,if this map have some language problems,plz understanding me.I'm not good at English.

I just want let foreigners know about Chinese map makers' RPG Map Productions.
This is my second map.

I was alreadly do all my best on my maps ,if it's not very good.Plz understanding me.thanks.

Map name:24 o'clocks Midnight:Suffering
Size:Med
Players:7
Game language:English (Hope you can understand what's my meaning)
Map author:yeah,that's me(FZ-The Ultimate Killer)
Testers: all of my FZ teammates and all Chinese WC3RPG Players,thanks

Special Thanks
Resource Makers:
(W):Born2Modificate,kieran1238,Kitabatake,Konstrukt,Sansui

(U):BlackSebastian,Caveman,Goldwolf,goth54325_3,Hellish Hybrid,Illidan(Evil)X,killst4r,Oliver

(O):CrazyOPOSSUM,Punisher_X,lami,Deathscythe36,mucfuc2002

I was wrote all your names in my map credit list,thanks for help.

About map:You are one of the GIS Special Force's member,one day there was sth wrong in the GOV's Building,so the Police order SWATs to find what happend,but the SWATs were offline ,so they need help that the GIS go to find the secrets.

You can use many different weapons,and go to in the building,find out what happened with your friends.
More plz read F9 in game.

Notice:1, Plz don't step on the fire
2,Plz don't press esc when play the movies
3,If your hero was dead,you can't relive
4,Plz choose a weapon,and get it on.If you don't want like a dead guy.
5,Team work
6,Plz don't turn on the all map display

Have fun.Hope you enjoy it.

Will give this a quick test, then a more indepth one after my comp lab.

Based on a quick test I just did, here's what I think:

• First of all, the map is almost 4 MB. Is it all necessary?
• I could not understand most of the map. The translation into English impedes gameplay a lot, at least in my opinion.
• I found nothing special in this map that you can't find in a huge number of similar maps I've played.
• Is there ammo?
• The cinematic at the start made absolutely no sense, even less than the rest of the map

The map looks nice, with all the models and skins, but the gameplay is nothing special.

ok,I'm not goot at English.Nobody can understand...if not in English,a lot of people can't understand Chinese at all.So English is the wild language,I choosing this map in English.
Now I really need a Englishman can understand Chinese,so can translate this map all in English perfection.
And ammo,I don't know how to make this trigger.

And this map's me size is 3.98 mb,so you can play this map online.a little big can't compress.

Sorry, but as I said this is an English site. Your map needs clear, correct English for the most part to be approvable. Also, as is mentioned, the size is a huge issue. Maps greater than 2 megs will never be accepted easily. You have no chance of gaining approval for the Wc3Campaiigns database unless you a) at least half the map size and b) get a lot better translation.

Sorry, but we have high standards. I will move this to Map Projects, as it is far from approvable. You can submit again in 2 weeks. Good luck.

ok,thanks.I understood.